*FF* There's Hope for Us Yet Ch.7 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey! awesome dear, just loved it please do continue sioon and also if possible please do pm me
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I think the guy is Randhir, update soon to see if my guess was right or not :)
Edited by Sabz13 - 12 years ago
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No No! No cliffy pleaseee
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M intrigued. Please update asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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...Don't speak as I try to leave 'cause we both know what we'll choose
If you pull then I'll push too deep and I'll fall right back to you...

'Cause you are the piece of me I wish I didn't need
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why...
Clarity by Zedd
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Chapter 1: Because She Believed Him

She was MAD. Very, very MAD.

He could tell by the way she was breathing heavily. By the way her eyes were slanted like a pair of sharp, thin daggers. And by the way she curled her fingers into a tight airless ball.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?" "Tumhe to maine class bheja tha, right?!" Though he would much rather stay here; make fun of her, push her buttons and maybe even dump her into a deeper mess than this, he really had to be somewhere right now. So he chose to quickly divert her anger towards a different direction.

"Mr. Class Rep!" "Andhe ho kya?!," she barked at him. "Meri halat nahi dikh rahi hai." "Mujhe sorry bolne ke bajai, meri madat karne ke bajai, mujhe sawal kar rahe ho!"

'Crap,' he thought. 'Wrong direction'

So he had no choice but to follow her direction.

"2 months hue nahi college mein, aur class ka raasta bhool gayi."

"Dekho-"

"Good, very good." "Aise hi chalti rehna." "Ek din iss college ka bhi raasta bhool jaogi. "All because of me", he stated so proudly like he just saved the world from a big oncoming disaster.

"Vardhan sir ne kaha-"

'Vardhan sir!,' he remembered. "Look, can we just not, today?" he offered. "I really don't have time for this right now and mujhe pata nahi tha ki darwaaze ke paas tum ho else-"

"Else-what?!", Sanyukta tackled.

"Maine tumhe push kiya tha, lekin giri toh tum thi, haina?" "So it's not completely my fault." "Vaise toh tum giri hui ho-"

"WHAT!"

"I mean humesha yaha vaha girti rehti ho jaise ki abhi," he corrected himself. He was really running late now.

"Tum kya larkiyon ko darwaaza ke paas "push" karte ho aur larko ke liye darwaaza "kholte" ho!?"

She came a little closer and whispered, "gay ho kya?"

Now it was his turn to reel.

"WHAT!" "Just shut up, okay!"

"No!" "I won't shut up." "Tumhari vajaise saara stacks unorganized huwa hai." "Just look at all this." "It's a mess!"

They were still sitting on the ground surrounded by blankets of white paper oblivious to the crowd of boys watching them with growing amusement.

Somebody courageous enough to approach the wet and angry young girl extended his hand to her.

"Do you need help, Miss...?"

They both looked up.

Sanyukta slightly smiled at the guy offering his hand. He, in return, smiled victoriously at the guy sitting next to her who was by now frowning at the sight of her hand in his.

She was just about to give her name when she felt her hand being pushed away.

"Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat"

He introduced himself as he grabbed the guy's hand and stood up. "Thanks, dude."

"Uh, sure." "No problem." The guy backed away, clearly disappointed at being interrupted.

The guy named Randhir turned back to Sanyukta and explained:

"Vardhan sir ne hi mujhe bheja tumhari madat karne ke liye because like everybody knows, girls are helpless." "I mean, just look at you." "Tumhe dekhte hi koi bhi keh sakta hai ki you need help." "Pathetic!"

He was right. She was really feeling pathetic at the moment, about to cry even, but because she was surrounded by a bunch of guys, she held back her tears and tried to get up only to scream out in pain.

"Oww!" "Ouch!" "My leg!"

Randhir's expression softened a bit upon watching her but he immediately cleared his throat and said:

"Dekho, ye tumhara natak nahi chalne wala." "I'm running late." "You think you can fool me with that girly scream of yours?"

"Last time I checked, I was a girl."

"Tum mujhe guilty feel karana chahti ho, right?" "Well, guess what, it's not working!" "Mein yeh papers leke ja raha hoon."

She was shocked. Undeniably in shock. This man was unbelievable!

So she did what she did best. She quickly bent down and picked up all the papers from the ground.

"Main yeh tumhe nahi dungi," she defied.

He huffed in annoyance at how unnecessarily long all this was taking.

"I'm the Class Rep!"

"Class ke andhar" "Filhaal toh hum ek different class mein hai."

"Are you serious, right now?!"

Yes, I am serious and I'm not going to give you the papers jab tak tum mujhse maafi nahi maangte," she stood her ground.

He rolled his eyes and said, "Look, I'm asking nicely."

"Well your face isn't asking nicely."

"Okay, fine." "Tumhe lagta hai ki yeh saab meri galti hain, right?." "So, I"ll just fix my mistake." "Main tumhe nurse ki office tak leke jaunga." "Happy?"

Her grip on the papers loosened as she half limped, half stood there, scrutinizing what he just said.

But wait, there's a catch, isn't there? There has to be.

No. Instead, he simply said, "Chalo."

So she believed him.

In the blink of an eye, she felt him snatch the papers from her hand and run out of the classroom leaving her completely stupefied.

What just happened?

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Aww!! Poor Sayu she let her guard down for a second and this is what happens!!

She's all alone with those guys again!!

Well, with her injury whose gonna help her?

Maybe her prince charming will come back for her?

Or maybe a new prince charming will emerge from the crowd and rescue her?

Or maybe she'll become her own prince charming and help herself?

Do share your thoughts!!

'Till the next update!!😉

Edited by mai47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...awesome upt
may be randhir come back to help her or she will help herself...
cont soo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! That was an awesome update! I think someone from the class might help her as Randhir thinks she's faking but maybe if Sanyu doesn't turn up to class or is rly late he might wonder. Update very soon coz I can't wait to find out ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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...Cause you are the piece of me, I wish I didn't need,
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why...

...If our love was tragedy, why are you my remedy,
If our love was insanity, why are you my clarity...
Clarity by Zedd
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Chapter 2. Twists, Turns, and Catch

"Here, sir." "I faxed all the papers to the number you gave me." "I brought the fax report as well.

"Table pe rakho", a gruff voice answered.

"Sir, you said you would choose the leader for the next project?"

"..."

"Sir?"

"Maine tumhaari baat sun li."

"Toh agle project ka leader mai-"

"Tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki tum leader hone ki kabil ho?"

"I have all the qualities, sir, of being a leader." "I'm confid...," his voice faded away.

Professor Vardhan stood up and kept walking till he met him eye to eye.

"Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat." "Do you think you can lead your team?"

Upon noticing Randhir's confused face, Vardhan decided to be a bit more straightforward.

"Do you think you can lead Sanyukta?"

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"You're all set!"

"Thank you," Sanyukta sighed, finally releasing the breath that she had been holding. She never did like the whole "hospital" atmosphere.

Underneath all that bandage wrap, her foot was now swollen very terribly creating a purple cloud all over her ankle.

"You're welcome!" "After all, it's my job to take care of young impulsive kids like you."

Sanyukta smiled at the cheerful nurse. For some reason she felt much better talking to her. They had been talking the entire time her leg was treated. It felt like forever since she talked to someone who reminder her of her friend, Kanika. Sanyukta felt like staying with her for the rest of the day but she had Professor Vardhan's class in an hour so she had to get going because with her foot in this condition it won't be easy getting there on time.

She tried getting up, falling in the process.

"I got you."

He grabbed her arm, helping her up. She looked up into his warm amber eyes thanking him for his help. He was kind enough to go and bring the nurse to the classroom instead of letting her walk all the way. He was the same one who had tried to help her up before, when she was paralyzed on the ground. Abhay, he off-handedly introduced himself trying to initiate a conversation to divert her attention from the pain while the nurse was treating her leg.

"Come back tomorrow and I'll change the bandage for you, alright?"

She nodded her head in confirmation before heading out with Abhay.

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Randhir was walking back from Vardhan sir's office, thinking over what the Professor had told him. 'Would he be able to lead Sanyukta?' 'It was already difficult dealing with her as his partner.' Being her leader was something he had to think about seriously.

'Che, she's always running around trying to interfere in my work!' She didn't listen to his warnings much less his instructions. He remembered the first time he had warned her about those stupid red wires. In the end, what does she do? She blows up the entire place! Just the thought of that stupid expression that she makes irked him. It was like a light bulb turns on in her head and off she goes! Being her leader sounded so tempting but just as much challenging.

But most importantly, how would he convince her into accepting him as their team's leader?

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She winced. She had to get to class in less than 30 minutes and here she was looking like an idiot trying to limp across the empty hallway. She swore she would get her revenge for this. It was sad. She was only 18 and already planning to murder someone. Pushing her murderous thoughts aside, she tried putting weight on her foot one more time.

'You can do it,' she thought back to the nurse's encouraging words. 'Come to think of it, she didn't even ask her name.'

'Stupid, Sayu.' Here she was worried about someone's name when she was running late for Vardhan sir's announcement.

'He did say it was very important," she vaguely remembered.

"Come on, bhaag," she overdid it with the encouragement and ran for real only to twist her leg and fall forward.

'Aaj ka din hi bura hai,' she finished thinking before closing her eyes slowly like she was falling asleep, as her entire body was sent crashing to the ground.

Except she didn't hit anything.

"You should thank me, you know."

A voice brought her back to reality.

She knew that voice!

"Tumhe Mr. Floor ko kiss karne se bachaa liya."

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Edited by mai47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really dunno whr to strt frm or wht to strt wid.
Evry tym u write somethin' nd its jst awesome.
To be honest I wsn't expecting new entry maybe coz I ws preoccupied wid Randhir bt still I appreciate it.
As "Actions speak more den words." I think Abhay hs alrdy fallin fr Sanyukta (maybe, I 'm jst guessing).
Gosh! U hv shown Randhir's desperacy vry brilliantly.
Leaving Sanyukta in d middle of d mess... claming captainship fr Vardhan sir... Ah! He cn really do anythin fr it.
D descriptionof Sanyukta's pathetic condition ws so perfectly done...
I cn imagin hw much embarassed she might be feelin' infrnt of d boys.
I felt pity fr hr limping condition.
I luved d way u portrayed hr firm determination. Though she ws in pain bt still wnt to attend d class.
Hats off to u!!!!
I wuldn't be doubtful if in d chapters to come u show hr killing Randhir (I srsly don't wnt it).

Hmmm... So u left it wid another cliffhanger. U surly knw hw to add intensity nd curosity to d readers mind.
D flow of d stry ws jst captivating.
It ws flawless.

M waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt. So gear up nd write it soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its a beautiful story... loved it!!! continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why do you leave every chapter in a cliffy? *weeps*
M loving this SS. Will post my views after u post the complete SS 😆

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