RaBir OS : Seven minutes in heaven - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -Eris-

and I am in the gutter πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

I did write FF  s earlier with Vanny .. but we never finished them ... and I doubt they will ever end so I wont ask you to read themπŸ˜† ... actually this was a scene I had in mind from a long long time but the man was someone else.. never got around to writing it ... Since KT is from NY I guess he is fine playing such games πŸ˜† .. 
I had written this when we had loads of Rabir interaction but what s going on onscreen is def not inspiring for round two...πŸ˜•

Your comment definately made me blush...☺️

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Yeah seven minutes can get pretty intense since seven minutes is a lot but apparently not for Kabir since he wants round two ☺️
Come on!!Maybe they'll see your this OS and of course 2nd round if you write and they'll get inspired πŸ˜†
Oishiii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
wow 
sooo romantic πŸ˜³πŸ˜³


Moumimon thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
wow vibs..i am almost speechless...😳
in rabir dreaming world...really an amazing loved it...😎
PS: if possible pls make a sequel of it..πŸ‘πŸΌ
it will be wonderful if we get any sequel of it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow, i m blushing, turning red this is really hot and well written. I do hope that there will be a second part. U have to otherwise our imagination will go wild. Good job keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
owww
great great great, i like it

thanks for pm
MSN_Vanny thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Awww...I just saw this!!! πŸ€—
You're welcome baby!!! Wonderful OS!!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Amazing os, thanks for writing it on rabir .. so romantic
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
My face is like β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ while reading this! I could so imagine Kabir asking for round 2 β˜ΊοΈ. Can we also get round 2 please? 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I never heard about such games before, so i google to know about it before i start reading πŸ˜†

Oh Eris gimme a hug please πŸ€—

You've just mastered it.. You haven't missed a thing, it was just PERFECT for me.. I have no complaint about their incomplete kiss in fact i loved his kiss on rachna's forehead to assure his love for her. The kiss was very cute indeed. 

BUT you better write on second round to complete the kiss πŸ˜ˆ 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
WOW ... πŸ‘πŸΌ
πŸ‘

Take a bow ... dear ... That was absolutely DREAMY !!!!