Ariya FF :: Jine Ki Wajah..part 15 pg 71 on 20 june(completed) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was so emotional and beautiful...👏👏

the beginning fab..arjun now dreams about roshni and Etf,he has lost everything now...😭

then his arrest and karan hodda...god you presented much better than the cvs..


even i loved that part where arjun resign and then leave along in the rain...

and then mujhko ye zindagi...i had been missing this song for such a long time...

i dont know whether ill ever hear this in the show again...but you keep writing...would love to read more from you...😳😳

waiting for next part

thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear It was so beautiful n emotional 
I loved it  a fab start 
Loved to read more of it 
Thanks for the PM 
n continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb start
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super start dear, continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm & emotinl prt
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was awesome, blossom and amazing fantastic update didu..
i just loved this...
you wrote very beautifully..
feeling bad for arjun he was so much in pain first roshni and now his team.
so arjun was in hospital he hears some commotion and sees through his gate.
so the inspector are interrogating arjun or they want to arrest him but arjun ne ek punch kya maara sabh dar gaye..
so arjun  was interrogating karan.
i love karan character.
so now both are together..
wow so arjun proved his innocence and usne prachand ka khel khatam kar diya..
omg arjun resigned his job..
loved the last part.
you wrote very beautifull didu..
just loved it...
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update dr...!!!!
OMG now not only nightmares of Rosh brutal murder but also ETF team members death also haunted him...!!!!!
Wht thy accused him for his team's death...!!!!
Loved how he proved his innocance with the help of Karan...!!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start...
arjun alone...

update soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb start yar...!!!
poor guy.. lost everyone and now is being accused of killing his team but love how he proved himself innocent caught that guy.. who was responsible for all this...!!!
last part was very emotional...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE STARTING. THANKS FOR PM. CONTI SOON.