Ariya FF :: Jine Ki Wajah..part 15 pg 71 on 20 june(completed) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago

Arjun:-kya yahi baba prachand he?

Karan:-ha kyo?

Arjun:-yahi he uss bomb blast ke piche..

Karan:-gr8 hamara kam toh ho gaya..

Arjun:-nahi abhi tak hamara kam complete nahi hua..hame usake khilaf sabut chahiye..

Karan nodded..

They start spying of ashram..

At very late night:-

Karan:-bahot badi gadbad he yarra..

Arjun:-kyo tumhe kuch pata chala..?

Karan:-kuch thik se nahi..par iss aashram me bahot sare garib log he jo yaha ilaz karane aye he..?

Arjun:-ilaz..yaha pe..?kya yaha doctors bhi he..?

Karan:-ha yarra..yaha pe aise log ilaz ke liye aate he jinake pass apni dawayiya,operation ke liye paise nahi hote..unaka yaha free me ilaz kiya jata he..issiliye toh ye baba aur uska aashram famous he..

Arjun:-oh ab sab samaz aa raha he..Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Arjun:-meine uss baba pe nazar rakhi..woh kal raat ko kisise milane jane wala he..ham uss range hat pakadenge..

The next day:-

They search clues..n get to know that the poor people who come there for medicle help..or any free operation..their organ such as kidney etc are sell by baba..

& the poor people even dont know that their one kidney is taken out in operation..

At night:-

Arjun follow baba..n found that the mantri also include in it..

he record their conversation

Then he come infront of them

Arjun:-aakhir tumhare chehre se ye nakab utar hi gaya..prachand baba..aur mantri ji aap bhi?

Prachand:-lagta he tumhe bhi apni team ke pas pahochne ki bahoj jaldi he

Arjun:-apni bakwas band karo..tum toh meri team ke bare me sochne ke bhi kabil nahi ho..Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Prachand:-tumne yaha aake sabse badi galati ki he

Mantri:-par manana padega tumhe..puri mumbai police aur special force tumhe dund rahi he..lekin tum abhi bhi sahi salamat ho

Arjun:-kyo ki..koi bhi agar kisiko dundta he toh bahar dundta he..koi bhi apne ghar me nahi dundata

Prachand(shockingly):-matalab?

Arjun:-mein toh tumhare hi aashram me tha..aur ab mere pas sare sabut he

Mantri:-sabut toh tab kam ayege jab tum zinda rahoge

Arjun smile

Next moment..DIG n commissioner come there..

they order to arrest prachand n mantri

Without waisting a second arjun leave from their

In aashram,with the help of karan they caught a truck which is full of human organs

They also shift the poor people in proper hospital

After sometime

karan n arjun in car..Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Arjun is driving silently..

Karan:-toh yara..teri line toh ab clear ho gayi..

They stop infront of commissioner office..

Arjun:-tu yahi ruk..mein 5 minute me ata hu..sirf ye resignation letter dena he..

He come to comissioner cabin..

Arjun:-i m resigning sir..This is my resignation letter,n my medals..

He put his gun also on table..

& before commissioner can try to manofying to him..he leave..

He start the car..

Karan:-tumne police force kyo chod diya..?ab toh tum begunah sabit ho gaye ho..

Arjun:-jis system ke liye..jis kanun ke liye meine apne apno ko khoya(roshni),apni family ko khoya(etf team)uss kanun ne,uss system ne muze kya diya..

Karan dont know what to say he remain quit..

They reach infront of karan's garage..

Arjun:-dont worry..Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Arjun:-police ke pas koi sabut nahi ke tum hi robin hudda ho..Woh tumhara kuch nahi bigad sakte..

Karan:-yarra..muze tuzse kuch bat karni he..?

Arjun(without listening him,give him keys of car):-tumhari garage ki he na ye car..

He get out of car..its raining heavily..Karan also get out of car..

Karan:-lekin tum itani barish me kaha ja rahe ho?

Arjun dont say anything n started walking towards a direction in that rain..

While karan just staring towards arjun..

Arjun is walking on a lonely road in raining..

Firse andhere cha gaye..

Khoi ujale ki kiran..

Kal raho me phul the..

Ab he kato ki chubhan..

Muzko ye zindgi..

Lagti he Ajanabi..

Chav bhi..

dhup bhi..

Har naye pal he nayi..Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb start
feeling really bad for Arjun
he first lost his Roshni n now his team
and then he got framed in their killings
but he's our super cop
and finally managed to prove that he isn't guilty
n Karan's part and help to him was awesome
Arjun resigned from his job owing to the losses of his dear ones
his words reflected his pain of losses
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start
superb
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
super start
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part...
well written... continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
NIce part di...loved it...but can we have riya in it...pls pls pls...can we?...anyways..will be eager for next part.