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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

that was a cute update
loved it
aww mansi is so cute
the sweet family hugg
perfect update
continue soon

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Aliza

@ChamakChalloO

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Super story very nice

Love dig chapter one two and cs awesome

But chapters so short

Give us long updates

Want to read further update

Update soon and write more u write very well

Lied your sory continue ASAP

Really very sorry for the late comment

Superb story amazing dear

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Amazing update sumayyah!!!!

Don't u dare call it bad!!!!!

Virika n Mannsi are damn cute❤️

update soon

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Samia Sobti Tacker :D

@Asr-Ki-Sam

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

very very nice update
luving the bond btn virika n mansi<3

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Grt update...
It was sooo sweet...
Update soon

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Nikhat Shaikh

@NikShaikh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

superb update
read both the parts together both was superb
pls increase the length yr too short updates
grt going keep writing
thanks for the pms
continue soon

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nani2630

@nani2630

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Very nice story
Why short
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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Nitu

@Angelic_Doll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

srry for late cmmt busy wid exams but it is a good story watin for virika romance

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sumayyah

@sumayyah1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

chapter 3

vadhera house

manvi and virats relationship explosion

in the hall
viren: jeevika
jeevika: ji viren ji
viren: manvi aayi hein tum usse milna nahi chahti ho
jeevika: haan
manvi: diii!!!!!!!!!
jeevika: mannnuuu
and they hug
jeevika: tum yaha
manvi: di wo mein aap ko milne aayi thi
jeevika: haan mein to tumhe bahot yaad karti hun

viren went back to get mansi whilst the 2 behnas were chatting
mansi comes with viren
mansi: masiii
manvi: mansi
chalo khelte hein
mansi: nodds her head
and virat arrives with the remaining family
virat: manvi tum yaha
manvi: haan mein yaha
dadaji:keisi ho betaa
manvi: mein thik hu
manvi: maa, sb app keise ho
both: hum theek hein
virat: maa, dadaji,bhai, bhabhi, chachu, chachi mujhe manvi se ermmm pyaar ho gaya hein
dadaji: kya
everyone:kyaaa
viren: ye tum kya keh rahe ho
virat wo hi ke mein MANVI SE PYAAARRR KARTA HU
sb:magar tum manvi se shaadi nahi kar sakte
virat: kyu sb ye meri zindagi hein aur mein jo chahta hun wohi karunga
dadaji:nahi virat tum ye shaadi bahi karsekte and that is it
and they all leave besides viren and jeevika and virat and manvi
viren:jeevika kya kare
jeevika: ek minute viren ji
hamein yeh poochna hoga ke manvi virat se pyaar karti hein ki nahi
jeevika: manvi kya tum virat se pyaar karti ho
manvi: haaan di
jeevika: ek kaa karo tum ghar jaawo kal baat karte hein
manvi: theek hein

virika room
viren:jeevika hamein in dono ko milana hoga
jeevika: haan viren ji
viren:dogi mera saath
jeevika: haaan

what will they do
will virat and manvi get together
i know its crap and shit and more than this.
its short but i shall update tomaro hopefully all going well
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