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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
part 3

nice update
but y they didn't accept for their marriage
NikShaikh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
nic update
I hope virika make plan to unite virman
thanks for the PMS
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
this update is specially for ammu(ammukryan),chandinibinda, nikshaikh and ofcourse my partner sona pari.
these few names i have mentioned encourage to write more and more
specially ammu.
enough of my bak bak now.

chapter 4

virika room

viren:jeevika hamein in dono ko milana hoga
jeevika: haan viren ji
viren:dogi mera saath
jeevika: haaan

in the hall
dadaji:viren ye case ki file tum parh lena aur case ko aage barhana tumhara kaam hein
viren: ji dadaji
dadji leaves and virat enters
virat: bhai aap meri madad kijye mein aur manvi bahot pyaar karte hein aur him dono alag nahi hona chahte hein
viren: virat kuch nahi hoga
haan agar tera pyar sacha hoga to sachai ke jeet hogi
virat: kya bhai aap apne profession ko ander kyu gaseeth rahe ho
viren: bharosa hein na mujh par
virat: haan
viren: to tum apne kamre mein jawo aur mein apne kamre jawu
virat: okk
and they hug

virika room
viren: jeevika kya hua
jeevika:kuch nahi
viren: ghar ki fikar minister keh rahi he kuch nahi
woow yaar
jeevika: kuch nahi hua hein viren ji
viren: to tumhe sona nahi hein kya
jeevika: hein na
viren: to jaawo
jeevika: kyu jaawu
koi problem hein
viren:hein na
jeevika: viren ji
viren: haaan ji
bolye na
jeevika: wo mujhe kuch ho raha hein
viren: kya ho raha hein jeevika
bataawo naa
jeevika: mere sar bahot dard kar raha hein
viren: itni si baat
jeevika: wo viren ji mujhe kuch nahi huwa hein
viren: kuch nahi huwa to phir ye acting kyu
jeevika:khair chorye
ap fresh ho kar so jayye
viren: haan

10 mins later

jeevika: viren ji
viren: hmmm bolye naaa
apne pati ki bahot yaad aa rahai hein kya. khair mein to yahi hu
jeevika: viren ji aap bhi na
chodye ye sab ko
weise bhi virat ka birthday agle hafte hein to hamein kuch to karna parega
viren: haan tum sahi keh rahi ho

thats it for today
wat will viren and jeevika plan for virats birthday
please leave ur suggestions and do comment on this story whether it is gud or bad. well i know it is shit, crap yeh but i dont mind bad comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
very nice update
thabks for the update and pm me
continue asap
and pm me
nice update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Sumi🤗
Update for me???? Aww...❤️ u dear!!!!
Y do u keep on calling this a crap???
I swear i'll never talk if u say it again😔
A bagful of roses for u for this cute update😉
Waiting to know virika's plan...
Update ASAP!!!
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nice Update!! 😃
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Lovely update...
Loved the little Viren and Virat part...
Hope that Virika will do something for Virman..
Thanks for the PM..
And update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update summy
loved it
waiting for virika suprise for virat
update soon and a long one
Edited by Cute_Meenal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
such an amazing update...
I loved it...
it's so so so amazing
the way jeevika was acting it was nice...
do write soon

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