I loved your story a lot.
I accidently came upon this one and I'm happy that I did :)
Please pm me for future updates. I would like to follow the updates.
NK's part was done so touchingly.
3 kids was too much, poor Arnav. I really thought it would be twins.
Payal-Akash part was cute to say the least.
Manorama mami as Dadi was also wonderful.
Its more about characters than story here and I like that approach.
Please allow me to read ahead...
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