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"So RK this is Pari and Pari you know RK don't you?" I introduced again. Our wedding was now pushed at a later date because Piya didn't want it on the same day as hers, frankly I don't blame her because she is really only getting married once and I wouldn't have wanted my wedding day to be on the same day as hers.

"And this is his sister Piya" I pointed, she smiled faintly and looked at me.

"Ok... so both the hen do's on the same day?" Pari looked at me, I knew instantly she didn't like either of them, they were uptight and too posh for her liking. She didn't like RK anyways from the beginning.

"Yeah..." I nodded. I didn't mind sharing the hen night with Piya, unfortunately same couldn't be said for her since she piped in.

"Um we could have different venues, one with Madhu's friends, and I'll spend the night with mine" she looked at RK for approval.

 

"Why not together?" he questioned.

"Well... bro..." she looked at me. "Sorry Madhu but I really don't like the people you hang out with. Yeah, you're alright but I know your type of friends" she glanced at Pari who was now shooting glares.

"Excuse me..." She clipped out.

"You're P Malhotra right?" Piya responded.

"Yeah, so?" She shrugged.

"Exactly, I've seen you hang out with guys who are paid strippers. Also I've noticed you hanging out with all kinds of people, especially bikers" she added.

"And... Listen you aint no posh bitch"

"Ok... let's not swear each other" I cut in glaring at Pari.

"She started it" she accused pointing her finger at Piya.

"Look... Pari you love me right. If Piya wants her hen night separately then that's fine with me" I told her.

"Yeah actually it's quite a good idea, I don't need an uptight bitch with a stick up her ass to spoil our party"

"Bro we're going home! I won't stay here with some girl who thinks her legs are doors and keeps them open"

"Right you wh**e" Pari screamed standing up from her chair, I looked at RK who looked just as shocked and confused as me. What the hell just happened, RK tugged Piya away who turned around lunging for Pari, I held Pari by her upper arm as she screamed and cussed.

 

"What the f**k woman?" I shoved her back into the chair glaring at her, I knew the people around us were watching as if we'd escaped from some mental hospital.

"I hate that posh bitch"

"Do you know her?" I asked not knowing why they had a dislike so quickly. I didn't think Pari's dislike towards Piya would be so much considering they'd met.

"Yeah... Her crush had asked me out instead of her. She'd asked him whilst I was there hoping to get me jealous and he'd told her right in front of me that he was going with me... You know what she said, she said sl*gs are welcome to each other"

"Oh... When was this?"

"Back in the first year of college, frat party" she replied.

"Ok... so you're both angry over this. It's been about... 3yrs right? Or is it 4?"

"4" she huffed. "I hate her"

"Can't you drop your hatred for me please?" I looked at her. "I'm getting married to her brother and I so can't have my best friend down my sister in law's throat"

"Why don't you tell the bitch? Why can't she let the f**king grudge go? I mean she's getting married to her boyfriend and she's still whining.."

"Alright... I'm sure RK will talk to her but please for me" I pleaded batting my eyes at her, she only rolled her eyes at him and sighed.

"Fine... I'll keep my trap shut but she says one word, I'm going to rip her apart and I mean it literally"

"I'll talk to RK and pass the message" I responded hugging her from the side. "And it'll be good if we keep the parties in separate venues, that way our party can be ours and theirs can be theirs, we've got the rest of our life to have parties together"

"Yeah.. I don't want posh asses in ours" she added.

 

I walked out once I finished talking to Pari, and found RK waiting in his car.

"Did you talk to Piya?" I asked climbing in.

"Yeah, they knew each other from before"

"Piya told you the story?"

"That Pari took her crush from her?" he looked at me.

"Yeah... but why are they keeping grudges for so long? Heck I've not kept a grudge on you for not being in Ansh's life"

"If I knew I would've been here" he replied tightly.

"Alright, keep your hair on. I didn't mean it like that. I just meant..."

"Let's not talk about that. We need to check on that son of ours" he started the car and drew away.

 

"Bullshit" I heard Ansh yell, I walked into the hall to find him shouting at the parrot RK had bought for him since he was dying for one.

"Buwshit" The parrot repeated.

"Ansh you dumb wit" I narrowed my eyes at him.

"Dumb wit" the parrot copied.

"Why did you bring that thing?" I frowned at RK.

"Because Ansh wanted it"

"Ansh" The parrot repeated.

"He knows me" Ansh squealed. "Say I love you"

"Say I wuv you" the parrot repeated.

"Have you thought of a name buddy?" RK lifted Ansh into his arms.

"Buddy" the parrot repeated once again.

"Yeah, I'm going to name him Madhu"

"What?" I glared at Ansh whilst RK seemed to find it funny since he started laughing loudly, Ansh joined.

"What?" the parrot squeaked again.

"I asked nana, she said ok"

"When did you talk to mom?" I questioned.

"She called your phone" he replied. "Can I take it?" he asked pulling it out of his pocket and started tapping it on him.

"No" I grabbed my phone back.

"No" the parrot copied.

"Damn parrot" I hissed.

"Damn pawot"

 

"Urgh! You're both driving me crazy"

"You already were crazy" RK laughed.

"You bas..." I clamped my mouth shut seeing his grandmother walking down, she smiled down at us, I shot RK a glare and smiled faintly at her.

"Have you planned everything?" she asked patting Ansh's cheek and settled down on the sofa.

"Um... we decided to go separate party" I replied.

"No one will have a separate party" She shook her head. "We've agreed to separate wedding but no separate party. I want you to meet everyone at the party"

"But Dadima this is a hen night" I reminded her thinking she'd forgotten.

"So? That doesn't mean I can't come" she responded. "I want to be there for both of you"

So no drinking, no dancing and definitely no strippers? f**k! I want strippers. I whined inwardly, pouting my lips at RK hoping he'd speak. But I forgot he was even more stupid, he only shrugged and walked away with Ansh.

 

"You're meant to help me dammit" I smacked his shoulder walking into my bedroom and found him playing with Ansh on the x-box.

"What do you want me to say? Dadima you can't go because your bahu wants her hen night with strippers and in a club" he looked over at me.

"I wasn't going to ask for strippers, Pari was" I replied.

"That doesn't mean you won't stare" he responded.

"Well... looking doesn't hurt"

"So you don't mind if have strippers?" he raised his brows.

"No, heck I'd cheer you on. I mean come on, you're so not cool like me and my friends. I'd even offered to take you to the strippers and get a free lap dance"

"Um... ok, Whatever. Ansh your mom has gone crazy"

"I know that" Ansh responded without looking away from the tv.

"What's this now? Gang up on mommy gang?" I crossed my arms.

"We're not ganging up baby" he pulled me onto his lap holding me tightly whilst he continued to play.

"RK I want a separate party" I looked at him whilst he concentrated on the screen.

"Dadima doesn't want it like that"

"Am I marrying Dadima or you?" I frowned.

"C'mon Madhu. How bad can this hen party be with both of our families and being the hen of both of you?" he questioned.

 

"You were saying?" I questioned RK. I'd called him over to the venue we were at for our hen party. Pari and Piya didn't stop going at each other's throats. My mother seemed to find some enemy from RK's side and ended up ripping the woman's hair. Dadima was sat in the corner looking confused as there was food being thrown, to others jumping on one another and ripping each other's hair out.

"Um... Shit. What the f**k should we do?" he asked.

"Why don't you take Dadima out? I'll call some of the guys over to help me with this..." I looked at them. "animalistic group"

"Dadima" he walked over to her. "C'mon lets get you home"

"Par Piya" she pointed to Piya who was on the floor fighting Pari.

"Madhu is going to handle it" he responded and walked her out.

"I'll be back to help" he told me and walked out.

"f**k..." I looked at them confused, wondering where to start, whether I should dive in and help my friend, my mom or my aunt.

"Oyyeee" I screamed standing up on chair. "Oyeee"

They stopped for a moment looking at me.

"Can you f**king hear the sirens?" I questioned loudly because there were sirens at a distances and I was sure the owner had called.

"RUN!!!! Or else you're spending the night in jail"

"What the f**k are you waiting for? RUN" I yelled again as they just stared at me, a moment later they were screaming, grabbing their things and running.

 

I jumped down gripping my mother's wrist pulling her.

"What the hell were you thinking starting a fight in front of his Dadima?" I snapped at her rushing up the steps.

"Well the woman's f**king wh**e of friend was there. That bitch was my boyfriend's ex" she responded.

"Whatever. You couldn't do this when the old woman wasn't there. She might not even want me as their daughter in law now" I glared at her.

"Shit" I looked up to find two policemen stood at the entrance blocking us in.

"You're under arrest for drinking and GBH" he said and pulled out two handcuffs.

"No... no no" I shook my head. "I didn't do anything. I was with my fiance, I just came to get my mom"

"Save it" he replied and started reading out the rights.

"I hate you mom" I scowled at her.

"Well hey at least it's one thing you get to do in a life time" she shrugged letting the officer cuff her, I turned around and soon felt the metal slap against my wrist.

I wanted RK right now.

 

We were escorted to the back of the police van and I noted pretty much everyone else had got arrested, some were lucky enough to escape, I however wasn't despite not even being involved.

"I'm so never talking to you" I grumbled to my mother.

"I like you mute anyways" she responded.

"I swear down I wish I let strangle you when he did"

"The old man fights like a girl anyways" she replied.

"I'm going to make sure they don't let you out, once I get bail I won't f**king let you out"

"Yeah yeah whatever" she rolled her eyes getting comfortable.

"You've been arrested before haven't you?" I questioned wondering how she could be so comfortable and not worry at all.

"For breaking a bas***d's nose before" she shrugged. "Ellis bailed me out"

"Well your new boyfriend isn't here" I reminded her.

"Who said he isn't?" she smirked.

 

"I'm going to kill mom" I told RK and my dad who'd come to bail me out, my mom was let out instantly because this new boyfriend of hers was already at the station and bailed her out before she was even let into the cell.

She only waved at me and left with him, she'd forgotten to mention this new boyfriend of hers was an officer as well.

"I'll help" my dad chirped in.

"Can we not talk about killing? You've just come out of jail" he looked at me. "Why did you get arrested for?" RK looked at me confused.

"For helping that crazy ass mother of mine" I replied. "Can you believe her? I so hate her now" I huffed.

"Alright, calm down" he took me into his arms, I noticed my dad rolling his eyes at us, I ignored him and slipped my arms around RK holding onto him.

 

"Dadima's so going to hate me" I muttered. "Is Piya out?" I questioned.

"She escaped, she's the one who came home and told me you got arrested"

"Great they arrested me when I didn't do anything but your sister escaped" I mumbled.

"Is Pari still in there?" my dad asked.

"Yeah and she's staying there. Because of them I was arrested" I replied.

"Don't be so mean. Take her home, I'll take Pari home" he told me and walked back inside to bail Pari out.

"I'm going to kill your sister, my mom, Pari and bury them alright?"

"Let's just get you home" he kissed my temple then walked me to his car. "Ansh is still up and waiting for you"

I sighed and nodded, he walked around and climbed inside.

 

"Mommy" Ansh ran over jumping into my arms. "Was it cool in jail?" he asked me.

"Who told you I went to jail?" I questioned.

"P did" he replied pointing to Piya.

"Well your P was being a little stupid. Mommy didn't go to jail, I went with your nana" I told him not wanting him to know I was arrested, Ansh might think it was cool so he might do some shit wanting to experience it.

"Aww I wanted you to go, I want to go to jail" he pouted.

"Alright whatever... go to bed" I responded. "Its late"

"I wanna sleep with you"

"Ansh go and sleep in your bed or else I'm going to get that witch from Hansel and Gretel and tell her to kill you" I glared.

"I don't like you"

"Good, I don't like you" I placed him down. "Now off to bed or else that troll's going to come and eat you"

"I'm sleeping with my babe" he stalked away, I looked at RK then at Piya who stood with her hands behind her back.

I shook my head then walked away heading to my bedroom.

 

RK walked in 20 minutes later and joined me in the shower, he turned me around and looked down at me.

"What's up?" he tilted my head cupping my chin.

"Nothing, did you talk to your sister?" I asked.

"Yeah... I know you're pissed off with tonight"

"I'm not pissed off, I'm f**king furious. I wanted just one night but no one could get along with each other" I replied sighing heavily. "I'm so going to hate this wedding if it keeps going on like this" I muttered.

"Don't worry, we've got a few weeks till our wedding. Let's just get through Piya's wedding, I'm sure it'll calm down if they come to know each other slowly and accept they're going to be a part of each other's life"

"I don't even want to get married now" I muttered.

"Don't say that" he lowered his head kissing me gently. "Today's been a crap day, it'll get better" he assured me kissing me tenderly, drinking away all my anger...

 

And it did get better...

RK had arranged dinner with only few people from my side and from his side and he talked to them how important they were in our lives and we wanted them to be a part of it, yes they might not like each other but for the sake of us and our wedding, he requested them to act civil to one another. Thankfully nothing happened since, everyone had gotten along, even becoming friends though some were still pretending.

 

"Why couldn't you get married on the day I got married?" Piya complained as she walked into the room I was getting dressed. Our wedding was here finally and it was happening, 2 weeks after Piya's wedding. RK planned ours, though secretly. I smiled looking down at the ring he slipped in my finger last night.

 

"You're f**king mind blowing" he whispered against my shoulder kissing my bare skin, his arm thrown around me as he curled up behind me after making love to me twice.

"I know I am" I chuckled. "By the way Ansh hates you again" I informed.

"Tell me something I don't know" he groaned. "I swear down I sometimes doubt he's mine" he grumbled.

"Don't you dare" I hissed nudging him with my elbow.
"What the f**k. That hurt" he groaned.

"Yeah it was meant to" I replied sharply turning around to face him, his eyes drew down instead to my naked breasts, I tugged the blanket to my neck covering myself. "Pervert"

"You're so crazy" he murmured brushing my hair from my face, the back of his hand slid down my cheek, then my arm then his fingers curled around mine, I tensed feeling something cold and hard slipped on my finger, looking down I gaped with my large eyes.

"Th...th.. What is that?" I looked up at him.

"Engagement ring" he replied. "I forgot" he smiled.

"You actually got an engagement ring" I asked in disbelief.

He smiled widely. "Yeah. We're getting married after all" he shrugged.

"We still haven't chosen a date yet" I reminded.

"Actually we did" he smiled surprising me. "Tomorrow in Italy, our flight is in a couple of hours. Wedding is tomorrow evening" he added.

"What? But we haven't prepared anything" I sat up panicking. "I was supposed to plan our wedding, I want..."

"Shut up would you" he sat up staring at me. "Everything is done. Like Everything, venue, reception, everything is done. You wanted a big one remember?"

"You actually did that?" I questioned feeling a burning sensation at the back of my eyes, I've never had anyone do something so sweet and meaningful, I stared at him rising my hand and cradled his cheek. "Why'd you do that?" I whispered.

"Well I love you Madhu" he replied casually with a shrug.

"You... you..." I stuttered, he laughed and lowered his head cupping my cheek.

"I love you Madhu" he whispered and kissed me hard.  

 

"Hi Mommy look" Ansh ran in, he pointed to his suit grinning widely. "Do I look handsome? Dad said I do" he added. I enveloped him loving the way he now started calling RK dad especially after Dadima explaining to him that dad has a greater meaning than dubby and it's a lot more cooler.

"You look like my little star" I pinched his cheeks kissing him hard.

"Pa and Nana have come" he pushed me scrunching his nose and rubbing his cheek. "They're fighting though" he informed.

"What? They're fighting" I stood up hiking my dress up and walked out of the room, I didn't have to even go far, standing by the stairs I could see them arguing with each other.

"Dad, Mom" I hissed loud enough so they heard, they turned their heads to me and frowned.

"Who the hell are you?" my dad shot back.

"That's Madhu" my mother nudged him hard and started coming towards me.

"She's in a dress" he pointed out with a frown.

"It is my wedding day, I won't be wearing jeans would I?" I rested my hands on my hips glaring down at him.

 

"Since when the hell have you worn a dress?" he climbed up the steps, I was eagerly waiting because right now I was going to punch the old man. He was starting to get on my nerves especially on my wedding day.

"You look beautiful sweety" my mother cried hugging me. "Oh gosh I can't believe you're getting married"

"Mom... I've got a kid so getting married isn't that big a deal" I replied.

"Shut up" she scowled sniffing.

"And don't be fighting here, you promised mom"

"Alright alright... Ellis is here anyways to keep me company and out of trouble" she winked.

"Urgh I don't need to know that" I scrunched my nose. "Now please just wait without fighting. Dad..." I looked at him.

"I promise not to kill her before I walk you down the aisle" he promised.

"Dad" I hissed.

"Alright alright, she'll still be alive"
"And he'll be buried in the graveyard, a few miles away" My mom cut him off.

"You guys promised" I sighed.

"Alright alright stop crying" My dad waved. "We won't fight"

"Good... I swear down if you do I'm going to bury you both" I threatened, they'd only rolled their eyes at me, I turned and headed back upstairs to finish getting ready.

 

"We've just your hair to do now" Pari told me as I walked back in. "Sit down" she pointed to the chair and grabbed her brush ready to get my hair done.

"I want an updo" I told her.

"Alright... you're so going to look gorgeous once I am done"

I nodded and looked down at my ring, I couldn't wait to get downstairs and head on over to the venue, though it was registrar but RK had made it possible. He showed me a picture of the venue where the ceremony will take place.

"Has RK set off?" I asked knowing RK was in an entire different floor.

"Yeah they're going to set off soon. Ansh is going with him and so are we" Piya replied. "Neil is going to drive us there"

"Ok..." I nodded in response.

 

I watched as Pari sprayed, curled and pinned, I sighed in boredom, though I was excited and was looking forward to it I didn't realize doing my hair will take so long. Piya had left with Ansh after getting a text from their side and it was only me with Pari and our group of friends.

"Oh come on" I whined. "I want to get going"

"Just keep your hair on woman, I'm nearly done" Pari scowled.

"You've only done half of my hair yet" I pointed. "You've got this half left"

"And I'm doing it, your hair is just too long" she complained spraying once again then curling and pinning in place.

"Anyways I still can't believe you're getting married" Cassie interrupted as she redid her make up again.

"Neither can I" I shrugged. I didn't think I'd get married, I hadn't even thought of that even when I had met RK, if his grandmother didn't suggest it I wouldn't have even considered getting married.

"Your husband is good looking an all but there is no way that guy would've got a chance in my book, hell he didn't know about the girl he slept and knocked up nor the son he fathered" Angelina was quick to drop in her opinion.

"We were kids, 16 and drunk" I replied.

"Still... he could've at least asked your name and he didn't even do that" she shrugged.

 

"Are you ever planning to get married?" I questioned Pari.

"Yeah... definitely. But to a girl, I don't like guys"

"No offense but really? A girl?" Cassie frowned.

"Yeah, why not? I think I like girls better, guys can be such assholes"

"But you like the strippers and guys" Angelina responded furrowing her brows staring at her confused.

"I thought I did. But I don't think I like them anymore" she shook her head pinning another curl into place.

"So when did you figure that out?" I questioned curiously.

"When we kissed"

"What? Ew you both kissed" Cassie scrunched her nose.

"Yeah we made out" Pari replied nonchalantly.

"I was drunk and feeling flustered and turned on" I defended.

"So doesn't help your case" Angelina pointed out.

"I'm getting married to a guy" I held up my hand showing them my engagement ring. "So yeah it does help my case and you..." I looked at Pari. "It was one kiss"

"So, I liked it" she shrugged. "You taste like strawberry ice cream by the way, did RK ever tell you that?"

A few times but I am so not going to tell you. I thought to myself inwardly.

"Can you just finish my hair so I could go to my fiance?" I stressed on my words.

"Yeah yeah, nearly done mother" she waved me off.

"I still can't believe it" Cassie muttered.

"Just drop it, it happened like so many months ago, even probably a year ago" I replied narrowing my eyes at her. I wanted her to stop bringing up the subject of kissing Pari.

"Wait if you field for the other side... how will you exactly have sex? Girls don't have bananas" Angelina questioned seriously. I burst out laughing from her reference of men's manhood to bananas, Pari and Cassie joined unable to help themselves.

"What the hell is so funny?" she asked frowning at us, which cracked us up even more, I held onto my stomach getting a stitch to my side and tears sliding down my cheeks.

 

"Oh my days don't make me laugh" I smacked her lightly laughing. "My makeup is going to get ruined" I grabbed a tissue and wiped carefully.

"I might just burn your hair if I don't stop laughing" Pari giggled curling another lock of hair, spraying, curling then pinning into place.

"Don't" I straightened trying to keep a stern look watching her seriously. "I don't want to be late" I told her glancing at the clock.

"Nearly done" she replied. "Cass grab the tiara" she pointed.

"Ang, veil" she gestured, once my hair was done, Pari placed the tiara fixing it into place then got the veil and placed it properly.

"Wow... babe you look really hot" Pari bent down looking at my reflection, I smiled staring at myself and couldn't wait for RK to see me. I was looking forward to seeing him even more.

"Let's get this show on the road" Angelina straightened grinning widely.

"We've got a groom waiting" Cassie added.

 

I smiled brightly seeing my parents waiting outside the room, we'd arrived at the venue, my mother and my father were both waiting for me. Mom was already tearing up, she walked over hugging me tightly.

"No matter how much I annoy you, and piss the hell out of you, just know I still love you" she cradled my cheek and pressed a quick kiss. "I love you and you'll always be my baby girl" she grabbed me again for another hug.

I pulled back looking at my dad who was waiting, he walked over and embraced me into his large arms, he for  the first time had worn a suit covering his large muscles that were adorned with his tribal tattoos though I loved my bad ass dad, I loved him for doing this for me today. It was almost next to impossible to get him to agree in wearing formal clothes rather than his jeans and t-shirt but he'd done it for me.

 

I was a bundle of nerves as I stood with my arms entwined with my dad's, I stared at the large wooden doors, behind those doors stood RK with our family gathered. I was going to be married to him, I hadn't thought I would be getting married to him especially with Ansh as my son.

"Ready?" my dad looked at me.

"Yeah... I think" I chuckled.

"C'mon" he pointed, the doors opened after he sent a quick text letting them know I was here, I quickly inhaled sharply and looked down. RK stared at me with the biggest grin I'd ever seen, I smiled back and looked at our family who were all gathered around.

"Mommy" Ansh yelled disturbing the soft music that filled the room making the others laugh, I shook my head at him and looked back at RK.

 

He turned to face me, and looked at my dad.

"Take care of her or I'll f**king spank you" he warned softly making sure only RK heard.

"Um... I plan to" he replied softly and reached for my hand.

"I expect her to be treated like a princess" my dad pulled my hand back a little before RK could take hold of it.

"Yes, sir I got it" he nodded.

"Don't knock her up again"

"Dad" I hissed pulling my hand away glaring at him. "Shut up would you? I'm here and want to get married"

"Alright alright" he huffed. "And you... I'm watching you" he pointing two fingers to his eyes then pointed back at RK.

"Seriously?" RK questioned.

"Ignore him" I responded taking his hand shooting a glare at my dad, he shrugged and went to take his place next to Ansh.

We turned to the woman and smiled, she seemed a little stunned and I guess she heard our conversation.

 

"You can start" RK told her.

The woman cleared her throat and started reading out, RK squeezed my hand as she came to our vows and we copied what she said.

I felt butterflies fluttering excitedly in my stomach as we got to the I do part, I turned to face him, he was caressing my knuckles as he looked down at me repeating the words the woman rattled off.

"Do you Rishabh Kundra take Madhu Malik as your lawfully wedded wife?" she questioned.

"I do.." he grinned at me.

"Do you Madhu Malik take Rishabh Kundra as your lawfully wedded husband?" she repeated.

"Yes, I do..." I nodded.

RK didn't wait, instead he lifted my veil and pulled me close cradling my cheek and lowered his lips on mine.

"I love you..." he whispered tenderly kissing me.

"I... love you too" I replied back softly.

 

"You can't kiss my mommy" Ansh yelled from behind, RK chuckled breaking away and looked at him.

"C'mere" RK gestured, he climbed off and ran over towards us. RK lifted him into his arms and wrapped both his arms around us and kissed Ansh's head then my temple. I stared up at him smiling faintly, nothing could've been more perfect. I had my family, around me, we're perfect, we're a mess, crazy, disaster and a complete cocktail of a family. I couldn't have asked for more.

 

Hope you enjoyed the last part, over 5000 words, 10 pages on word doc. Please do leave me your feedback/review on the SS overall.

I know I was late but writing comedy is really hard for me, thriller/romantic/action/mystery/drama/contemporary I can type so easily but comedy has and is always the hardest for me to write on.

 

I may type an epilogue, well I have started on it, I might just finish it off depending on the response for this final part. 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ending
Loved the last part most
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue
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What a love update..truly a cocktail😛😛
the whole family is crazy..will miss this weirdo family..






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Posted: 9 years ago
It was one of my fav story as it was a comedy genre n i loved it to the core
Superb update 
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superb ending...
waiting for epilogue.. 
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It was an awsmm journey
M gonna miss this story
Nyc ending dear
We deserve an epi
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ending.pls do write more rishbala stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome . It was so funny and Ansh is so cute. Everyone in this story is damn crazy even piya and pari. I loved it. Waiting for the epilogue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved and enjoyed this story