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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
another update enjoy
chapter 8

[continue from chapter 7]


whole room filed with silence , as deadly silence before wild storm , arnav whose heart beating fast , he has fear , misery and guilt together ...fear of losing his only sister , who is taking care of him like his mother ... misery of what if she misunderstand him and din't give him chance to explain his deed ...guilt of making her and her sister's life hell ...what if she also leave akash because of his deeds...he is in dilemma what to do , suddenly he feel soft assuring hand on his cheek and he look at his sister , who is looking at him worriedly , his heart skip beats after seeing this care and concern ...he keep his own hand on payal's hand and decide to tell everything ...and left every thing on her , what ever punishment she decide he accept it...


payal see numereous emotion on arnav's face , and feel guilty to make him remember everything again ,but she can't help it she need to know ... she put her hand on his cheek and said " bhai its ok , if you are not comfortable , not need to tell me anything , just relax "


arnav see in payal's eyes and hold her hand tightly and confess " I am the reason of all happening payal , I broke her trust , her love ...I accuse her that she has affair with shyam ..." he said all this in one go ...and cry his heart out...and broke on floor completely can't see his sister's unbelieving eyes...she understand him as best brother and son of this house ...but he is monster or beast in all way...


when payal din't said anything , he confess everything from start till he fight with khushi and accuse her to coming in his life and all ...there is only mute listener is payal , as akash is already left in middle for urgent meeting ...



after 10 to 15 minites arnav look above and saw the place [study room] is empty ...and his heart too...

Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
hiii...friends...thanks for support...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ank_gan

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Thank you dear for mp me. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Awesomeness dear
😲😲 What is gonna happen next. ?..???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
new update

chapter 9

morning sun rays always bring new life , new beginning and new start in every one's life...let 's see that same is applicable to arnav's life also...


IN ARNAV'S ROOM

after yesterdays's conversation , he locked himself in his room , din't want to face his family specially payal ...he can't see accusing and hatred in her eyes ...he always saw respect and brotherly love in those eyes...he decide to go early to office and come home late...


he just come out from bathroom after taking cold shower ...his door knok ..., if it was regular day , it was payal who bring his coffee with his usual business news paper , but there is nothing like yesterday...he become confuse that who is there , as he strictly inform every member that no one allow in the room except payal , akash and nk...


akash and nk must be getting ready in their room and payal [name itself bring guilt in him] may be never see his face again...his chain of thougths broke by another loud knok...


he walk up to door and open it and turn his back , he din't want to see anyone or talk with anyone of family member ...he started to getting ready in his usual way...then he hear sweet voice which he become habitual from last five years...


"bhai ...why you din't open door ...I was waiting outside with your coffee and this is your news paper..." said cheerful payal ...


she enter in his room and put his coffee and newspaper in table and open the window curtain...and smile looking at arnav who is become statue after seeing payal in his room all smiling and taking as usual through mirror...he din't say any thing just turn his face in side as payal can't see him crying ...he know his sister forgive him but is he deserve this forgiveness ...no he can't...


payal making the bed proper and the things he needed regularly...


she take off his hanki , wallet , watch and other things from cupboared and put it all in bed ...


" bhai ... all things I put in bed as usual you needed ...[she walk up to him and make him stand infront of her ...started putting tie around his neack ...and give him coffee to drink...] bhai ...come fast downstairs I am waiting for u...and don't forget to bring my gift..."


she about to leave but arnav stop her ...her normal behavior making him guilty more and what this gift ??????????he can't understand anything ...so he stop her and take her both hands ,without looking in her eyes and said " payal I don't deserve this respect and your affection ..please punish me ...I know you forgive me but only mistake deserve forgiveness not sin ...what I deed is a sin , sin deserve only punishment..."


" how could you justify what you did is sin or mistake ???????????? its only decide by me , and I know my brother never do any thing which harm his family or love ones...what you deed is only your love for your sister and I am proud that you are my brother and I am member of your family bhai...which brother does the thing which you did ?????? huh tell me na ...your love , affection , respect towered the family is unique bhai ...and we love some one we always want them to smile and happy and that what you did that's not wrong ...yes but the way you choose is completely wrong ...what you did with khushi is wrong , but in all this what you get ...nothing nor sister or love ...if some one become prime victim is you bhai ...you lost every thing ...but you never lose me ...I always there for you in your every path ...but still you get punishmet , which I give you ...so be ready and come downstairs..." said payal with lots of love and concern

arnav who overwhllemed by this just hug her noded like good child who get his faviourate toffee back..." what gift payal ...there is no one birthday today or any festival then ..."


payal who hear all this said faking anger " bhai ...you forget what is today ...I am not taking with you ...I am going " she left...


arnav who try to stop payal become more confuse and started to remember what is today special and see hariprekash who just pass by hall and he see in his wrist and shout "damit ...its rakhi today ..."



he hurriedly went in hall started to find payal , he saw every one ready and nk already there ...he too go there and stand infront of payal , who is busy arranging thal for aarti in mandir... he scretch his head then he remember he forget to bring gift...

payal who saw horror in arnav's face started giggling and make sad face to tease him ...payal tie rakhi first to nk ... and nk gift beautiful sari and matching necklese...then she come in front of arnav ...who is feeling like fool and try to say something but he see smilying face of payal and understand that she just teasing him and he too smile ...payal put tika on his head and after aarti she tie rakhi on arnav's wrist too and feed him suger free ladoo...

arnav = payal I am really sorry , I don't have any gift right now , I forget about raksha bandhan ...plz...for [ he say further , payal stop him by putting her hand in his mouth and noded in no and give him glare for asking forgiveness again and again]


payal = its good that you forget ...now I can take my faviourate gift from you ...you can't say no ... [aranv smiled at her childishness and noded in yes] hmmm...so I want ... bhai I want ...[ arnav who is getting impatient asked "what" ] ...to celebrate my next reksha bandhan with khushi in this house ... will you give me ????????




Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome update
Payal forgive arnav.
Looking forward to seeing more.
Please continue.
Thanks for mp
ank_gan thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#27
new update enjoy

chapter 10

arnav promise payal by taking her palm in his and as granting thier both wish the bells of devi mayia's temple too started ringing and conferming their wish... and said payal to come office at afternoon...he about to leave the place but voice stop him ...

'chote you forget that you have elder sister too...who always tie rakhi first in the morning in your wrist and then eat any thing but you forget every thing ...' anjali said with crying...

arnav - ' i din't forget any thing mrs.jha ...you forget my words which i told you to remember forever ...any ways let me repet ...

" you are just daugter of this house and my mother and one resposibility which given by my mother to me or in specific words just on son's duty ...not my sister ...i repet for you mrs.jha ...[IN LOUD TONE] NOT MY SISTER ...DO YOU GET THAT ..."

payal instentely held his shoulder and try to clam him by signing her eyes ...he close his eyes and left house after reminding her to come office at noon without break fast...

anjali who feel humileted run to her room and cry her heart out because today she face the real ASR'S worth...

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ANJALI'S ROOM

shyam who is smriking in his mind and feeling happy that distance between brother and sister growing day by day...that what he want and now he easly use anjali against that asr...

shyam [hugging anjali ] - i know rani shahiba , how you feeling but this is not his fault ...its all that payal's fault ,she want to take your place in this house ...

anjali - i know shyamji , but till i am alive no one can take my place in this house and my chote's life...he is my brother and only i have right on him ...i prove him this one day shyamji and he regerate for his behaviour and come back to me ...his di...he can't live without me shyam ji ...u know na ...

[she try to make understand more than shyam to herself ...but she forget when time slip like sand from hands only empty hands remains with lots of sorrows and guilt...]

shyam - anjali i want to give you good news...i clear all amt of loan of bank ...and my debts too ...now we have our house anjali ...i am so happy...just needed your signature on house name transfer papers ...i want thatt house on your name my rani shahiba...

anjali is too happy after hearing this and sing papers without reading ...

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AR DESIGN

payal serving lunch to arnav and akash both ...as arnav din't eat anything she make his faviourate kheer to chang his mood...they were eating , payal ask

'bhai ... do you like kheer ???? i make it for you specialy ...'

arnav [ teasing tone] - no i dont like it...[try to hide smile but akash already see it and he to smile ]

payal - why bhai ... it din't tast good ...i am s [ but she cut by laughter of both brothers , then she understand she is prenked by both ...]

arnav - payal i din't like because i love it...you make it best kheer ...and they all smile ...

arnav - ok lets go ...i want to gift you something ...its your day ...akash you too join us ...

akash - no bhai ...i have meeting ...you and payal carry on ...i meet you at home ...he leave the room...

payal - its not needed bhai ... you are with us ...its more than sufficient ...no need of any gift ...

arnav - i am your elder brother and only i take desicion what is needed and what not ...so just follow me [ in asr tone]

payal [ with smile and in salute position ] - YES BOSS...

they laugh and left ...

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IN CAR

payal mobile beep in messege tone...she see it and open messege of akash

'bhai is in good mood ...try to tell about the jewellary thing to bhai ...its serious matter payal ...'

payal brathe stuk in the throat as she totally forget about that whole thing ...she look at arnav and see he is looking normal after lunch ...may be its perfect time ...she can atleast make him awar about the happenings behind his back ...

payal - bhai i want to tell you something ...

arnav - not now payal we reach at the jewellary shop lets purchase something ...then we speak ...come lets go...

Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome update,
Poor anjali in blind in love.
Baster shyam... he is spoil the relative.
Kheer conversion was superb.
Please continue.
Thanks for mp me.
ank_gan thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#29
hiii...friends ...
I am not getting proper response buddys...
plz...read and give comments...
chapter 11

arnav and payal went into jewelry shop ...arnav asked the owner who is their family jeweler to show diamond and ruby neck piece... he show them some diamond and ruby neck less and other in gold too ...

owner remember something and asked payal

' what happen beta ...don't you like them ...I am thinking you all are upset on me that's why you din't come to sell your jewelry to me...if you told me earlier I give you better price than sd jeweler ...we have old relation ...'


arnav who get shock after hearing this said 'what the ...who told you that we sell any jewelry...its not our coustum to sold our family jewelry...who told you this bull ****...

...he is angry that this old man is saying lies, to sell more...he grited his teeth and about to ask more but stop by seeing payal's pale face...


owner - beta I show daamd ji yesterday at sd jewelr shop ...I ask about him and they told me that he come to sell some jewelry ...he needed money aspa.. so he sell all jewelry without knowing current price...


arnav who is getting shock by shock see at payal's pale face and her tears ...he immediately come out from shop and started breathing haviley and tears started to gether in his eyes...the pain of betrayal from his sister now getting unbearable to him...his heart is still not ready to digest the brutal fact but truth is stabing his heart and making him hate his own blood sister more and more ...why ???????????why ??????????????[he shout and cried ]


payal who see's arnav in parking lot sitting on his knees and crying and shouting 'why...why'

can't able to see him broken ...she sit beside him and hug him and asked for forgiveness to din't tell him before ...arnav who heard this can able to bealive that payal know this still hide from him ...he hold her shoulder tightly and asked her by shaking

'why ...payal...why din't you tell me...you know this before...'


payal can't see accusing eyes of arnav , she started narrating all happening and how she come to know...






Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
new update
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