After reading the first 2 chapters I had bookmarked this story, in fact my
email box was full of emails related to this story, I decided to delete it from
my watched topic the day you have posted it in the index, my email box it's
really grateful to you π
I was going to sleep when I remembered that I have yet to finish it, and here I Am π 2am in the morning π
Okay this is the best and I mean it, story with Arnav and his daughter, the best things about your story are Jennifer is like ASR but her heart is just like her mom, you had given a lot space to Jennifer and Arnav which normally author forgot to do, then it was really simple, I love the way Arnav and Jennifer talked on the simple things and bonded with each other doing simple silly things, and the plus point you hadn't dragged it.
This is just like a bad night story, I will call it like this, something to read before going to sleep, it makes you smile, laugh, a little of dhak dhak and left you with the sensation that outside in this world there are indeed love stories like this one.
But I'm little sad, yeah a little one, when it ended I was left like this "already ended"
But I don't want to ask for an epilogue, if you don't feel like writing it, and plus because this story it's about Jennifer and her mission on finding her Daaddyy and I think her mission was completed, at the end she got her Daddy.
So thank you for this lovely and heartwarming story.
Brilliantly written
P.S. thanks for not making Jennifer a second ASR, which normally people do, they turn the kids in ASR, but a worse version of ASR. Areh kids are innocent and smart not business tycons.
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