SS: Friendship is second name of Love : Chap 2 Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago

   

Guys I am new to this forum and read many writers here that inspire me to write this story.
My story is totally different from the Jodha Akbar serial track and it also not concerned with personal life of Akbar The Great too...I just only use some historical characters.
It is totally different. Its totally a fiction.

Jalal and Jodha are best childhood friends. Jalal is Mughal whereas Jodha is Rajput but they never let their religion came between their friendship
Jalal is emperor of Mughal empire whereas Jodha is princess of Amer.
Their parents also have friendlly relation as Raja Bharmal ( Jodha's father and King of Amer) saved Shehenshah Humayun's (Father of Akbar and former king of Mughal empire) life.
Many opposed Jalal and Jodha's relation. Especially Hindu priest and Muslim maulvee. But Jalal and Jodha didn't hear any one.
But what will happen when this relation get a new name "Husband and Wife"? Will they accept each other? Will their life be manned with happiness or will their life be spoiled?
If you want to know then please like this post and give me your opinion to continue or not?
I am sorry if I wasted your time...
If you love my story then I will post Prologue AND Character Sketch too...


Sanya...😊  β€οΈβ€οΈ
Edited by san.gar - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa101

Definitely continue! 😊


Will Continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sanya you can continue for sure but either delete the line that it is not history as you yourself revealed that Jalal is the emperor of Mughal & Jodha the princes of Amer as we no longer have kings & queens. You can just restrict to their religion, if you con't want to call it related to history.

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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz


continue 😊
eagerly waitng 4 ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

Sanya you can continue for sure but either delete the line that it is not history as you yourself revealed that Jalal is the emperor of Mughal & Jodha the princes of Amer as we no longer have kings & queens. You can just restrict to their religion, if you con't want to call it related to history.


I m sorry dear. Actually I meant history of Akbar the great..
It is totally fiction.
i m sorry nd I will edit it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seems interesting...please continue soon...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: san.gar


I m sorry dear. Actually I meant history of Akbar the great..
It is totally fiction.
i m sorry nd I will edit it

No need to say sorry dear😊😊. If you want a vast freedom to play with yoru charecters, restrict them to their religion and if you want, claim them from stallwalks of their community. The moment, you call them royal, you will diminish your chances to elaborate their fictional aspects.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice indeed...plz continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks...fabulous..well done