Hello there, Deeps.. Sorry yaar, late ho gayi!!
Firstly, wow, lady! Are you set on a mission to get me fainted?!
Kya Arnav ko banaya hain aap ne?! Seriously, I'm in love with this mysterious guy!!
He smiles! Which in the sense is, he's free from creases of forehead, closed fists, hardened face & red eyes.. Brilliant, Deeps! I loved the way he smiles *All my 32 are out, shining*
He apologizes too!! In the sense, he gives a day off or sponsers a drink.. Astounding way of apologizing.. *kinda drooling*
And, he's head shot! Gussa tho excpected hain, but, ithna intense? Not complaining yaar.. B'coz you see, the more complicated his outer facade is, the more softer and golden his heart would be.. But, its kinda shocking you know.. Swearing, breaking, shouting was okay.. I mean, chalega, can be expected..
But burning?! Gosh! That was completely outta d blue!
He' s been suffering from night-mares, which apparently are nothing but the agonized parts of his painful childhood.. Now, thats where you'v hooked me! And thats where I fell for this Arnav, a tormented soul!
I must applaud for the way you'v picturized the rest, Deeps..
1: Arnav-Anjali are not on good terms? That is completely new!! And quite intriguing..
2: Arnav's not a Raizada by birth? *rubbing my hands*
3: Khushi is against God?! Gosh! Thats a new one again!!
4: Payal's the l'il sis & the one who's acting all hormonical while Khushi is over-protective? Bingo, I loved it!
5: This Aman is cutie!
6: The other Raizada, I'm not gonna guess yet, is so contrasting with Arnav.. As in, in morals.. Damn! Now thats highly interesting!
Arnav & Khushi share a fraction of the past.. The moment his Taawiz became hers.. The only driving force that she believes that calms her.. Thats a beautiful connection! I loved it again!!
Arnav has a dark past, so does Khushi?! Jeez! Loving it already! Cant wait to have the entire one unfold!!
I loved many a parts yaar.. When Arnav shouted at Aman to get out, and him coming back giving a piece of mind, both of them getting back on their comfy zones again, the light humor yet intense climate.. I loved everything of it..
The way you'v mould Khushi in being independent, her way of loking into life, the Buaji convos, relation with Nk.. Perfect!
And the best part is, WeCare!
2 tormented souls with scarred pasts, struggling every moment of their life to find the solution to come out of that agony, have yet another common feature 'WeCare'.. And I loved every single part of it.. Be that Khushi's side to it or Arnav..
May be being a highly Arnav biased girl, I found Arnav's involvement in WeCare & his wish to adopt the cutie pie more heart warming and awe going factor..
Secondly, thankyou so much for giving us yet another wonderful piece of work.. While 'The Dawn' relaxed me, 'The Valliant' is making me sit on the edge of my chair.. And one main factor for that is, your prologue! Kithni confuse kar di yaar.. But its highly intense & really challenging..
Shall be waiting eagerly to watch how you'd solve the maze you'v wanted us to know before we read this..
Loving it more & more with every passing chapter and would love to love more!!
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