saruv ss:crazy saachiji sensible dr dhruv(ch 4:pg 7 (4/12) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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voewww
read ch2

its so good dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow interesting yar! I mean will this be like Madhubala? It was one of my fav shows back then.. but I really liked this fresh concept.

N the first meet will always be special one for any love story. Great going.,. n sorry for commenting this late! Woh main busy thi na, making my own topics n reading at home.. that's why.

Update soon❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .shinchan.

voewww
read ch2

its so good dear


thnks shinchan...ch 3 cmng soon..infact half written already..
hope u like tat 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyamvada

wow interesting yar! I mean will this be like Madhubala? It was one of my fav shows back then.. but I really liked this fresh concept.

N the first meet will always be special one for any love story. Great going.,. n sorry for commenting this late! Woh main busy thi na, making my own topics n reading at home.. that's why.

Update soon❤️


thnks 4 liking it...i ve already started wid the story..
nope it wont b lyk madhubala..i knw v lil abt movies nd all as i watch v few...bt it wud b close 2 medical if u want,tat i knw much abt!😉
u ll find this story diff 4m others hopefully!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
chapter 3 updated
plx giv ur views...
nd ur suggestns hw 2 proceed wid the story??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
nice one! dv and sachii in a single cottage! things are gonna be interesting now :)  we don't know dv has a gf yet or not, so it can go either way.  update must :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabir_hi

nice one! dv and sachii in a single cottage! things are gonna be interesting now :)  we don't know dv has a gf yet or not, so it can go either way.  update must :)


thnks 4 reading nd thnks 4 cmntng...
it really z a push nd it appreciates u 2 write better...😊
well yeah i hope thngs ll turn out interestng 4 u guys wen i write it..hav planned a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Awsm fantastic fab Tina... I jus loved it. U hv really good writing skills.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naneta

Awsm fantastic fab Tina... I jus loved it. U hv really good writing skills.


thnks naneta 😊
am really flattered wid ur cmnts...any suggestns 2 improve??or add on scenes??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey tina.. :) nice chapter 3. i luvd it.. so its saachi getting attracted to dv here, right? i like it..
so u can show some flash back of how saachi knew dr dv.. how they became friends n how their bonding strengthens while staying in cottage now..
these r my ideas.. u r free 2 ignore. cont soon dear.

cheers :)