Firstly, that's a really wonderful banner made by Harhem! Loved it, really depicts the whole story in that one banner.
Coming to the story...wow! It is just brilliant!
To be honest, when I first read chapter six I was confused and didn't know what to comment as I couldn't wrap my head around the whole supernatural element. It was nice but I just couldn't connect Arnav, Khushi and a curse that dates back to a century. I did read a couple of ArHi stories revolving around fantasies, but this story mixes the present with the past and an unbelievable magic so I was kinda clueless.
But now after reading this chapter, I am completely bowled over by the story. Some of the mysteries have cleared and I remain as engrossed as ever. I am totally seduced by the love that Arnav has for Khushi and his efforts to break the curse. I am a little worried though about how the curse can break, it surely has got something to do with his love for Khushi and I am apprehensive, but since you have promised the readers a happy ending I shall breathe easy and after a century of despair, Khushi surely deserves her love to triumph! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Btw I really love how you spin a different story each time from the tagline "nafrat paas aane na de, mohabbat door jaane na de"!
Loved it in Shattered too
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