Its been ages since I read something that is as HOT as this!😲☺️
OMGGG...
This was HOT. So damn HOT.
I read from start to end without a second break.
You wrote it so well :O
AND WHY THE HELL DO YOU THINK ITS NOT SATISFACTORY?
I loved it.
This has to be one of the most HOT One Shot of KR I read.
I loved how you portrayed everything.
I loved the 'hard' moment😆
I dont know exactly why but I loved the moment she moaned into the pillow with his hands caressing her spine.
This is really an amazing piece of work.
I loved how you portrayed their relationship.
TO BE HONEST,
I did feel it might go vulgar becoz chances r way too much.
But you surprised me seriously.
This is too good not only content wise but with how perfectly you kept everything upto mark and in a meaningful way.
PLEASE DO LET ME KNOW FROM NEXT TIME.
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