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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Well i am sure not all may be knowing how crowded our Mumbai locals are.. then let me tell you its something where a person with rational mind won't think of entering one.. Yes, you heard me right, especially during the peak hours people like us, stand on the foot-board and hang outside the door. People sticking to each-other, their sweats mingled and the moment they are out they stink.. horribly stinky..

And how did I think of writing something like this?

well That's simple again.. I was just travelling by one on a normal weekday along with the group of friends and suddenly such a thing clicked me.. Now you call me insane, well not a problem, I am hearing things like those since many a days.. nothing new.

Anyways people of Mumbai definitely would have experienced a Mumbai Local, impossible to stay away from one if you stay in Mumbai.. And Indians would at least have an idea of, if not, then at least from the Bollywood movies, Abhi bhi if you don't know how a Local is.. Refer to the picture below.. And you will get to know how horrible it is..

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

: : : Index : : :

(for all the One shots over this thread.)

PlayingLove:

It's local - above

The Hot Gift - page 5

Lucky Night - page 11

Bed of Roses and Promises - Page 16

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Now before u start ur emotional drama to get my unreserve. Let me hand it over to u myself.. 😃
How fast am unreserving.. so not me.. 😭

Isme direct action hoga bola tha mene 😎
Anyways,
How cn u count my praises as "JHUT" after writing THIS? 😲 😲
*shakes my head* kya zamana aa gaya ha..
Well, coming to the OS..
it was amazing.. lol rey ka pov..
Shit! It was so awesome!
Gawddd! Making out in a fully loaded local train..
Hadh hi ha.. seriously u are UNPREDICTABLE..
As i said before ye idea is a proof of ur creative mind. 😉
Chalo kamse kam andhera toh tha.. mujhe toh pehle laga tha ki ese hi chalu. 😆
accha ha baki ke logon ko utni details nai mili.. jitni hame mil gayin.. 😛
Ahahahah...
the old uncles dilogue got me ROFL!
Gawwwd.. people shooting daggers from their eyez..
and by wat u have written seems as thou ye toh inka roz ka ha.. 😲
It was indeed an splendid one.. i so loved it..
it came out just like i expected.. even above my expectations..
Finally am getting this.. ITNIII KHUUUSHHIII

now the unreserves u took for this 😡
Hey bhagwan!! Itne pappad bele hain mene..!!

Disclaimer 😆 HADD HI HO AAP!
P.S- me apne maa baap ko kya btaun? Ki aapne locaal ke upar kya likha? 😆 😳

Unres karke ehsaan kar diya duniya pe.. 😃 😎

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky
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nahi sudheregi 😡

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-
nahi sudheregi😡

😆 jo sudhar gaya uska naam rashi nahi !

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome OS...
Loved it...

Traveling in Mumbai's local
Is one heck of a thng...
D crowd n all D pushing n all...

Kriya is also naughty...
N wat to tell abt Rey...
Woh toh hai he humara Romance king...😉

Hayyee m gone in Reyaansh land..
KR kissing in D tunnel...😲

Dear
Jab bhi mei train me travel Karungi
M gonna remember dis...
N all
Thnks to u...😳

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Superb os
Train mai romance
Mumbai locals ke crowd ke bare mai toh kya khena
Kya kya nahi jhelna padta
Kuch diff tha par accha tha

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res
thats exactly my college hr story
uff...itni bheed me bygod pata nai hum kaise chad jate hai
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Unres
oh freak...damn yaar
IT's AWESOMMMEEE
me loved it *to the power of infinity*

damn how cn i forget that i hv actually witness these thing many times🤣
nt going much in that

coming to the os
it super freaking awesome
yaar mumbai locals ki yehi khashiyat hai
har din nai kahani milti hai

you perfectly wrote it

after hell long wait i found an amazing KR os that i can read 4 god know how many times <3
and i love u for that
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So they were jugling between work and college time...
Aaahhhaaa :p
i wondered no one saw them kya?
Lol warna mens dabbe me agar ladka ladki sath me bhi khade rahe na toh u know evry pair of eyes will be on them :p

bt i loved the way u showd their story
and tunnel bygod bade fayde hai iske
hehe
rey ne chance pe dance mara
amazing superb
me loved it
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Thanx 4 the pm
sory 4 the late unres

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago