You're My Life!! [Bonus Chapter - Page 74 [25/11/15] {COMPLETED}

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kryanfan1

@kryanfan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

What a wonderful surprise!

And yes, I did cry..!! 😭

One of the best updates I've ever read..!!

I wish you could continue this story..!!

Thanks for the pm.

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

crying so much right now

what a beautiful ending

to a beautiful story

thank you

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

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Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Wow!!
This was such a beautiful update
The bond between viren n his kids was amazing
Bt ih felt quite incomplete widout jeevika
Nevertheless awesome update
Ih was really sad
Thnx for the pm
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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Okay when you told me you have a Suprise for me I was so excited and thn i came here and saw this!!!
Omfg!!! Omfg!!!
This update was a perfect closure that this story needed!
And i love you for writing this!
The way you showed Viren's condition and how the babies are missing their mother and coping without her was super sweet and sad at the same time!
Amazing thats what i can say!
Loved it !!!
Thank you for writing this! keep writing more and keep suprising me!

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Gaahhh 😭😭😭😭😭😭

My heart!!

I'm so so glad you wrote this

I loved reading about them in the future and how Viren's managing without Jeevs

Kavix2 are such adorable kids!

You've depicted their relationship with their dad so beautifully in this update

Viren's such a cute, loving dad, his reactions made me smile

"Wouldn't our lives be so much more different and easier had we have mom with us?" Kavana murmured out of he blue. "Kavi, See that there?" he pointed at the brightest star, "That's mom. watching over us. Not just that, she right in our hearts."

This!!!

Those lines are everything ❤️

You've ended this story off in such a poignantly beautiful manner

I can't thank you enough 🤗

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Yayy! Another bonus update.

Loved it *_*

Kavan and Kavana are awesome kids and Viren is the best father anyone could have.

Though they have a piece of their lives missing but I love how they never let each other feel that emptiness.

The flashback scene was so cute.

I would love to know how Viren use to take care of both his kids when they were small. *Just imagining if we get a Thread 2*

And yes not to mention my tears. Not a few but many tears.

You left me in an emotional web.

Keep it up

Love.

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#517

awesome update

loved it

loved the whole update

totally

amazing

superb

fantastic

mindblowing

thanks for the pm

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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Riidddhhhiii... you made me cry😭

How can you do this? it was damn emotional...😭

I cried reading these updates... it made me speechless.This story is and will be forever close to my heart.

You know what?at some point i hated how you made jeevika die,i swear i hated you for doing this but sigh not every one has happily ever after together and i cant really hate you bcoz i love you so much.this story melts my heart from the beginning .

i know how it feels when The person you love the most dies.i cant imagine the state viren was in. and about their little twins... its not fair to anyone of them.This same story happened with one of my friend she too lost her mom when she was born and i can feel every bit of this how it feels.I cried , i literally cried when i was reading all this there were tears continuously flowing from my eyes and guess what i read this story the day when my exams got finished i swear girl you made me cry that day everyone gets happy but i was crying why jeevika had to leave and couldnt live with viren and their kids.

I love the bonus chapters how Viren decided to be the one alone raising their kids and how amazing their kids grown up. I loved their names. its adorable. and i love their for each other and also i love how they both cared for Viren.

And off course what to say about Viren he is the perfect man in the world.no one i mean no one can replace the one he is . he stole my heart.

virika's journey was fabulous in this story.The matured yet cute jeevika and viren of this story took my heart away.The way they met and love.

their journey was just like a fairy tale.

and the last few parts... when i really told you how i felt and you must know when i read the part where jeevika dies i got goosebumps i still cant get over the fact she is on more in this story.

this story took my breath away.

I love how you write you are so brilliant.You write with your heart.And the feel when i read your story cant be explained by me.

You are amazing girl.you know i m your fan right? there are only few writers who take place in your heart and you are one of them.I can never get enough of your writing.

I love you girl.

Stay blessed and keep wrting more.

I m yet to read your other story and now heading to read that.

sorry i coudnt comment nor read this story and i m hell late for everything. but being a final year student , i cant help it. Now that i have got semester break i m reading all FFs.

Sorry again .

But i love you.

Keep writing.

Lots of Love <3

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Nikhat Shaikh

@NikShaikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#519

Love the story so much..beautifully written. Don't have words to describe. It's actually made me emotional.. Can only say beautiful... thank uu so much..for this story and thanks for the pms..keep writing.

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