Originally posted by: vironikajain
Read 2 updates together..
Story moved with good pace..
Juhi is out..but Ram is feeling so bad..Priya is hurt too..
Nicely handled by Ram..
Lets see how Ram will manofy his sherni now..she is still angry
Nice updates..
Originally posted by: anupam_dil
hey nice update...
continue soon...sorry for late reply... I read the update but I don't know some how missed commenting...
Priya : hi khush. Ye kya kar rha hain tu??
Khush: hie priya angel. Kuch nahi bas ek act ki prctcse.
Priya: acha. Kya act hain???
Ram was staring at priya from the door...!!!
Priya though knew ram was starng at her dint evn gv a glnce.
Khush: angel kya act hain mein btaunga...par mujhe aapki madat bhi chahiye, to imprpve dialouges. Agar khi par dialouge chnges ya expressn chnges hain crct kijiye na.
Priya: ha zaroor. Ab batao ye act kis bare mein???
Khush: Grlfrnd ruthi hain hain aur mujhe use manana hain. Pls help kariye na.
Mujhe script likhe dijiye mein enact karunga.
Khush: ha angel script hain par mujhe psbd nhi aaya. Aap itne books pdte ho, pls try write smthng for me pls.
Priya: seeing his pleading face, ok. I will try par kuch guarantee mhi bta skti, 'cz this is the frst tym.
Khush: no prpblem angel. Itna guarantee hain mujhe ki meri angel jo bhi krti hain perfection se krti hain. Chalo hlp me.
Priya:.arey abhi toh btya hain schne de.
Ram who listns to this convo rushes into the room and sits beside priya.
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Khush: sochiye arur batayiye angel.
Priya : mein kuch der mein btati hoon schke.
Khush: ok. Mein todhi der mein aata hoon angel.
Ram looks at priya longingly. Priya doesnt gv him a stare and moves into their room. Ram who is following her closes the door. Priya who was witnessing all these acts as they dint matter her. She moves near her dressing table puts the pen and book on that.
Ram moves near her and kneels down. Priya is shocked.
Ram : priya pls mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe nhi pata tha juhi ise mu krlgi mujhe. I knw u r hurt, but pls trust me, meine kbhi bhi juhi ko us nazar se nhi dekha. For me she was always ur frnd and a secnd mother to my children only during ur absence. Pls trust me.
Priya: aap uthiye phle. Koi ajyga.
Ram: anedo. Mujhe koi prob nhi. Tum khdo ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya toh ut jaunga.
Priya: par mujhe farak pdta tha. I dont want any1 to see u like this.
Ram: nhi uthunga.
Priya moves from there, but ram holds her hand to stop.
Priya: hath chodiye mera.
Ram: pls priya maaf krdo na. 7yrs tumse door rha. Aur bardash nhi krskta. Us tym bhi tumhe bcha nhi pya aur ab phirse meri hi glti ki wajeh se tum chalijaogi. Iam dyng wid guilt. Pls aur mat badao.
Priya: hath chodiye. Ram leaves her hand knowing his shernis anger.
Priya moves into chngng room. From there she calls neha.
Priya: neha ek.hlp karogi
Neha: ha bolo na priya.
Priya: see to it that no.one dstrbs us for smtym. I.need to talk to him.
Neha: who knows the seriousness of the situation promises her that she wldnt allow anyone upstairs.
Priya then.makes a call to bansi kaka and asks him to.gt their dnr to their room now.
Bansikaka takes dnr to their room. Neha sees bansikaka going and understnds that priya has ordered dnr in their room and chckng the tym she realises that she needs to leave.
She moves into krishna's room and sees that daadi is also there.
Neha: aunty priya ne kha ki unlogo ko koi na dstrb karey. Pls aap dekhlngy. Mujhe ghar jana hain, vikram.ka call aya tha...
Krishna and daadi too knew wat was gng on so thy promise neha that thy wld allow nobdy to dstrb raya.
Green room:
Bansikaka arrives and knocks the door.
Ram is shckd sensing his position now.
Priya comes out of the room and goes to opn the door, ram pleadingly looks at her.
Priya silently opens the door and takes the dnr from bansikaka and asks him to leave and not to dstrb them.
Bansikaka agrees and moves out.
Priya takes the tray and bolts the door
Priya plces the tray on the table, comes near him. Ram lifts his head, priya bends and places a smooth kiss on his forehead.
Ram looks on baffled. Priya smiles and asks him to get up.
He gets up and sits on the chair.
Priya: aapko kya lgta hain ram, itna asani se aap par mera vishwas ud jyga. Nhi ram i always trusted you, and i trust u evn.nw. Haan todha sa insecurty jaroor tha. Par aap par vishwas jyada tha. Jis insaan 12 ( frst 5went priya went away+7 yrs in coma) saal tak.mera intezar kiya. Jab ki glti har baar meri thi. Ram puts his fingr on her lips to stop her.
ram: kbhi ise mat schna priya. glti hmesha tumhari nhi thi. phli baar jab crash hua mujhe theek se search krna tha. seeing those bodies mujhe laga tum bhi mujhe chdkar chaligyi and scnd tym tumhari frst call hi uthaleta toh wo sab nhi hota. har baar khi na khi meri glti bhi thi. tum apne aap ko dosh mat do.
cups her face and kisses her eyes to stop the flow of tears.
priya: nhi ram.. i mean mr.kapoor
ram smiles hearing his name.
ram: bht saal hgy tumse ye sunkar. ek baar bolo na.
priya: arey mr.kapoor pls and gets up to go from there.
ram follows her. priya meri baat suno. bas ek baar khdo phir nhi puchnga.
priya turna back. ram comes very close to her. mr.kapopr ye kya kar rhe ap??
ram: meine.kya kiya. mein bas puchrha hoon. he has nt realised hw close they r.
priya: pls move. koi ajyga.
he has now realised how close they are.
ram, with his ever mischievous grin: koi nhi ayga. i hv heard u bolting the door.
priya looks down. ram lifts her face in his palms : pls priya. yha srf hum dono hain ab kya prob hain. pls ek baar bolo na.
priya: mr. (her wrds cut short as ram.plces his lips on hers)
priya is shckd bt as she realises and starts respnding. ram seperates himslf.
priya: mr... again the same thng happns
now priya understnds wats gng in his mind.
priya, looks at him : ram.
now ram smiles.
ram mujhe aapse kuch baat krni hain. phle dnr krle.
Ram: haan bolo na.
Priya: abhi nhi. Phle dnr krlo. Aur ye promise krye ki aap sun ne ke baad react nhi krngy.
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