Tere ishq mein-os (updated part 6- page-17)

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Posted: 2013-11-14T05:55:14Z

as per one of my friends request...!!

here are the page no.s for the updates...!!

part 1- page1

part2- page2

part3- page3

part4- page8

part5-page 12

part6-page17

hie friends...!!!

this is my first writeup...!!!

and my take on the current track in balh...!!! pls excuse me for all the mistakes...!!!

feel free to give your comments...both positive and negative.


<font size="5">Scene starts with priya coming back to the room after apologisng juhi..!!! </font>


<font size="5"><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ram sees that priya is upset over what all hpnd...</font></font>

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He calls pr</font>iya : priya iam sry...i hurt u...!!! But...(he was not finding words to let her know that its b'cz of juhi he was able to take care of both the children and business..)</font></font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya understands his prob: dont b sry mr.kapoor i understand. I should not have shouted at juhi. she was a great help in these 7yrs!! Thanks for stopping me...!!! She smiles at him...as if assuring everything is fine..!!! He feels good...and comes near her to give a hug...but backs himself remembering priya's dialogue..!! </font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Both are lying on bed...but were facing their backs to each othr...!!! Ram realizes that he needs to allot more time for priya and find whats bothering her...!!! Priya on the otherhand assures herself that ram and juhi are just friends and but is a little bothered about pihu...but she thinks of finding every detail of pihu's life in the past 7yrs...!! </font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Late night, its already cold due to the weather Nd ram has switched on his a.c. Priya feels cold and turns to the other side.Ram too turns..now both r facing each other. Priya snuggles unto ram..!!! Ram encircles his hand over her waist and pulls her more onto him feeling his warm hand, priya snuggles more, raises a little and kisses his cheek and buries her head in his chest and sleeps...ram gets awaken due to the kiss and realizes that priya snuggled to him and kissed him in his sleep...his joy knew no bounds..!!
He gets naughty and increases the temp.
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<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya feeling cold hugs him tightly.
Ram is on cloud9 feeling priya so close after 7yrs...he realizes his need of her in this life...Nd promises himself that he would woo her and marry her again asap...!!! He kisses lightly on her forehead hugs her tightly and sleeps.</font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Morning time...!!</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya wakes up first and finds that she has snuggled to him. She feels bad. She thinks of finishing juhi and sid's marriage asap, so that she can marry her man again and hug him with all her rights.</font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">she removes herself from his grasp and moves into washroom to freshnup...!!!</font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">a little while later, ram too gets up and sees that priya has already got up...!!!</font>


<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ram thinks to himself (ram beta,chalo start wooing your own wifey)</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">to be contn.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">feel free to comment...!!!</font>




Edited by chakravarthty - 2013-12-20T06:33:25Z
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Posted: 2013-11-14T05:58:16Z
Nice os...
ab ram kya krne wala hai...
raya ka romantic scene aur hona thaWink
raya k beech aur beech kuch kuch hona tha Embarrassed
continue soon !!!!
Edited by Mini1991 - 2013-11-14T06:44:38Z
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Posted: 2013-11-14T06:41:27Z
mm sooo cute Embarrassed
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Posted: 2013-11-14T07:29:23Z
That was a great start... Please continue soon... Thanks...Smile
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Posted: 2013-11-14T09:30:03Z
hmm only in ff ram will be wooing wife rest mein he is busy comforting juhi and wooing herOuch

dekte hain chalo start karoo
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Posted: 2013-11-14T12:11:49Z
Aww lovely start..lets see how Ram will woo Priya..
Do cont soon..
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Posted: 2013-11-14T13:08:54Z
awesome writing... update asap
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Posted: 2013-11-14T13:45:02Z
Part 1
I actually liked night scean where Ram wanted Priya but didn't crossed his limits & respected her wish too if in that hours he did anything Priya won't stop him but letter she will felt guilty or might be in middle only getting her lost seanses in her hubby... but loved Ram here thinking of marrying Priya ASAP after & wooing her back...waiting for next do post soon...
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