ArHi TS: From Darkness Unto Light *Complete*

The first thing I loved abt this was d way u ve presented it... Both their versions in their head comin out to us.. tht just makes this story so exciting..n I must say 2nd half came out as beautiful as I wanted it to be n much more... so ur Di is pretty impressed... 😛

Khushi s melancholy... her being socially awkward...her journey to accept Delhi but heart longing for Lucknow... wid al these her character was so nicely painted for us tht later when she speaks of her office boss his secret importance in her life...u feel like an old frnd opening up to u after years...just soo natural...dint feel like story was short n something was a miss at al...everything was very beautifully put choti😃

For Arnav s part I had thought of al possibilities.. but Alladin cudnt ve occurred to me in like 7 janams also he he😆 wel that's y u r d writer I suppose😛😆

He was so dam adorable.. who Arnav? nahi re... Alladin😛😃

wel my fav part is yet to come... they together ofcourse😳

The way his heart aches when she is in pain n his heart soars when she smiles is Oh so so so sexy abt Arnav I

The way he felt lighter wid her was very cuuute... perfectly ended! they r each others solace...!😃

Great job choti..👍🏼 write more of such stuff... wel after d exams ofcourse!😈 he he

Nice.

Thanks for the pm.😊

So now Arnav knows a little more about Khushi...what will he do next? Ignore what happened between them?

The way you wrote the point of view of Arnav and Khushi.

Loved how Arnav lit the candles in Khushi's home and brought light into both their lives.