Arshi FF: Unwanted Desires#5 - Teaser Chap.68 pg.98/ Note pg.103 07/08 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on new threadπŸ₯³
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Chapter 62

The update was splendid πŸ‘πŸΌ

The bonding between Akash & Khushi was wonderfully written - Akash finding a siter in Khushi & seeking her advice on some decision about his life which he thinks that will change many lives indicate that the amount of trust he has built on her after witnessing her support for Arnav. Khushi apologizing to Akash & then gladly calling him Bhaiyya was nice πŸ˜Š  Khushi telling Akash that she couldn't keep anything to herself without sharing it with Arnav & insisting him to reveal it as per his comfort & plan showed how she feels that she completely belongs to Arnav & also how maturely she handled the situation giving importance to Akash's thoughts rather than troubling him to tell her. The first half of the update portrayed that Akash is changing gradually for the good & that he will be able to come out of the loss of his wife & handle his as well as Arush's future in  a good way


It was nice to see Akash openly admitting to Khushi that he was blind by the confusions reeling his mind & thanking her for showing him some light as if she hadn't spoken out he would have even ended unweaving some beautiful relationships


Arnav amazed at the way his fiance was running into his cabin like an eight year old with vibes of enthusiasm, reading her excitement & drawing an idea of helping her in her arrangements for Arush's birthday was thoughtful of him. At the same time Khushi not wanting  his employees have a bad impression on him for leaving out in the middle of office hours reflected how much she cared for him in all aspects ... she's the most wonderful partner one could have ... Arnav is the luckiest man ... same for Khushi, she is the luckiest woman as Arnav is most understanding & he gives importance for her in his life ... love the way you have carved Arnav & Khushi's characters & always admire them, hats off Varu πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


The plan hidden behind Arnav's smirk & Arshi's romantic moment was lovely  πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†  when hasn't anyone interrupted, now even the things in Raizada mansion have got themselves attuned to disturbing Arshi. Arnav asking Khushi to remind him to switch off his mobile on their suhagrat was awesome


Wow! Happy Birthday to "Unwanted Desires". Would like to thank you for sharing your tremendous & marvelous piece of writing & this journey has been a beautiful one 😊

Thanks for the PM. Love to read more ... WAITING  

 

 

 

 


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Posted: 10 years ago
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(Un)wanted desires  is very much wanted amongst us ...so wishing this FF many more threads to come ... wonder what are the desires that are gonna course thru this thread alongwith arshi πŸ˜‰

thanx for remembering me  πŸ˜³ 

ps will post my comment on the update a little later  πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations on new thread
Edited by DaisyHoney - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread dear.
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Congrats for new thread πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations for completing one year of writing and the new thread.
Even after 1 year I love reading this story as much as a year before...

glad that Akash &  Khusi finally found friendship... and is he planning to break his engagement??
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD πŸ₯³ continue soon
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chap 62...

finally khushi and akash had a heart to heart talk...its always difficult to have smooth family atmosphere when two members are at loggerheads...now that that problem has been sorted am definitely looking forward for arush's b'day ... was any water left in the pool after these two came out or had all the water evaporated πŸ˜‰ in the heat they generated between them πŸ˜†

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon πŸ˜ƒ 

ps congrats(belated) on 1st anniversary of UD...this story was the major reason for me to step into the world of arshi that lives here on IF and i dont regret it πŸ˜ƒ wishing UD many more such memorable anniversaries to come πŸ˜†



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...