MMFF-Partners In Crime- FINISHED! last updt pg 99 - Page 8

Amazing...mast...chap..😊.

Res :)

Edited...

It was amazing di...

Phew... All are safe...

Now waiting for the next part !!!!!
Thanks for the pm :)Edited by purvi08 - 10 years ago

awesome ff yar👏 and thanks 2 back our Mohan Bhatnagar
bahut jyada yadd ata hai that Zabardast character.🤗

& megha - monu little rumani pal 😳and thank 2 save them...and I am relax

Loved it so much

pz next update jaldi karna.
Edited by NAMM5 - 10 years ago

That's beautifully written, Luxji!!!  Megha's guilty in not saving the baby amidst her relief to know that the baby is ok, is very well written! I felt for her too! 😊
The emotions among Mohan's family is very well felt as well, while reading the chapter, dear! Nice flow of words with simple and enough emotions put through! That's nice to read and feel for the characters! 😊

Great going on the story progress!!! I am waiting to know what happens next! How the baby is going to get back to her parents and how MM's meeting is going to be! ❤️ Nanhi has already created a bond between them unknowingly!!! That's very very nice and sweet!😳

I got goosebumps after reading the 3rd chp. Thank goodness, they all r safe! Waiting for the next update. ^

Very nice chapters Lakshmi👏 happy to know that all are safe but what about Prerna, hope she is also safe 😊 waiting for the next chapter.

i have visited this forum after ages.. n i am so happy i got to read ur story...

brilliant concept.. continue soon..

awesome update👏

. Edited by lilylakku9 - 10 years ago

thnx a lot nbtnmkkfan,  KKK143,  sonn_da,  yami2410,  khush_nelofer,  angeala95,  NAMM5,  -Amanat-, -...mohini...-,  raokrithika,  purvi08,  shivangi838,  meghan27,  Senpoo, Shruti21, adi



Edited by lilylakku9 - 10 years ago