Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey
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*Happy tears* I so hope ki bilkul aisa same to same ho show mein! :'-)
Really? Well, even I hope 😆
Damn yaar Mihika! This was so... Well I really don't have any words to describe how I feel. You are truly a gifted writer. Gosh your writing has that impact. I am teary right now. Those feelings.. Both Rey's and Taani's.. You wrote them so well. Inspite of being a SwaRon fan you've written a MIND BLOWING TR OS!
Baap re 😲 😲 Thanks a ton! Itni tareef! Even I'm having happy tears now. 😳😭
And I told you, I STILL don't think I've done justice to their characters, but I'm so glad you liked it. 😊
Seriously re, Hats off! Those lines, those feelings, gosh! I could perfectly imagine them. As if it was happening in front of my eyes. I don't know how to thank you for this re. I really hope show mein bhi bilkul aisa ho. I want them to be together and fight for their love.
Bohot log yeh mujhe keh chuke hai 🤣 Fighting for love is always better. 😳
I so loved this part, VERY TaaRey-ish
You have absolutely no idea meine kaisi condition mein OS likha hai 🤣
"Why didn't you go with others?" She asked, breaking the silence and shifting her gaze.
"You very well know that."
And then this..
Without wasting a moment more, he placed his lips over her forehead.
I've always adored their forehead kisses, that love which they share actually shows in those kisses.
Well, I thought that part was a bit incoherent. 🤔 But glad you liked it. 😳
And then that hug.. You described it so perfectly.
And then their convo after Taani told him that she was getting engaged was so apt and realistic.
Thanks. 😳
And this.. "I WANT YOU TAANI" He said, dotingly, and so audibly that she almost froze.
Trust me Mihika, I'm so teary right now. i mean , these dialogues which you put in have had a great impact on me.
🤣 🤣 Thanks a TON!! 🤗
"Taani" He said and looked right into her eyes. "Do you love me?"
From ^^ This part till the end.. That was what made me cry in happiness. Pehle mujhe laga that its gonna have a sad ending. But then.. It was heart touching re :'-) I so so so hope that show mein bhi aisa ho. I want them to fight for their love.
Frankly speaking, mujhe bhi iske baad ka pary acha laga. 🤣 And yeah, I was contemplating over the ending! Laga ki I would make it a sad ending, but socha ki happy karti hu. 😆
Oh Girl, you are a BRILLIANT writer! this was one of the best TaaRey OSs I've EVER read! Truly girl! Thanks for this and Hats off!
This was a serious challenge for me!! I'm really glad you liked it. 😳 Thank you sooo much <3 😊
Sorry for this long comment, but I can't help myself after reading sucha heart warming OS!
No problem! Thanks a TON for the sweet comment and appreciation. 🤗
P.S.- Going to PM everyone on my buddy list 😃
P.P.S- You still havn't told me why you want it to be TR 🤔
Facebook pe batati hu!! 😆