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Posted: 10 years ago
I was reading this series and then forgot to bookmark it and lost touch.
Thanks to Meera I am back on this thread and read all the stories again.
I have bookmarked it now.

When will these two sit down together and have a real conversation.
NK and Lavanya are caught in this web unnecessarily.
Arnav and Khushi will one day get together as it is inevitable.
This will adversely effect the other two.
Just witing for Arnav's wish to come true,
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a great job on all your shots! This last one is one of my favorites :) Can't wait to read the next one!! 
-Maya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

Powerful wish there Arnav especially when you are both as powerless in the face of that invisible thread holding then together. Be back for more later



Sometimes only wishing is the only thing left. When hope seems to have abandoned you, innit?

Will wait for more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
This reminded me ...of a helpless...moment in IPK...when...Nk and Khushi hadn't reached RM...and when Arnav found her...she was buying Chana...and the best part was when he  said...seeing NK...and after what had happened ..he had said...Khushi in the car now...what a moment in IPK...felt the feeling again after reading this update...jealousy...and how...Fabulous...

Arnav's wish was priceless...well then again...can the heart win...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: greenteaholic

True. One day its all going to ooze out and like Meera said in an earlier comment, its going to be supernova-y proportion :) What's Nasoor? Between them things aren't simple. Had it been simple, all they need is a simple conversation which goes like:

Arnav: You like me?
Khushi: Yes. You?
Arnav: Yes.
Khushi. Okay. Good. What's next?
Arnav: Lets move on.
Khushi: Okay. Awesome.
Arnav: Cool.

The End.

:-)


Nasoor is one of those untranslatable Urdu words, roughly means an ulcer/abscess in English. Here I used it in the sense of a troublesome wound which refuses to heal. :-)

That conversation is so totally Payal-Akash of the show. πŸ˜†

 
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you meera for the link to this FF
 
I thoroughly enjoyed reading all the 12 chapters
dear writer, u r excellent in ur work -
arnav and khushi are meant to be together - hope they realize this sooon - LA has been portrayed well here
will wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archana.mh17

I think I've said this before, but let me say it again, you are a genius with words! I couldn't comment on the previous chapter, but here I am!

Your writing evokes the same feeling, has the same tension as the show did in the beginning till the contract marriage track! Its what was missing, eventually in the show, but we get to see that in an alternate universe, here(perhaps the one that was meant to be, but never shown in the show)! Its beautiful! Your writing is beautiful! You have preserved the essence of Arnav-Khushi, yet gone beyond what we all were shown, to tap into the raw potential these two shared which was not, fully utilized!



Thanks a lot Archana :) I am hoping the tension isn't unwarranted [sometimes I feel life is much simpler than A or K]. I am not deviating a lot from canon but it is eventually an AU since Shyam's angle will be dealt with in a different manner. I have already hinted at it but want to deal with it differently.

Thank you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

A wish dat ill b fulfilled purely by god for arnav..
😊 πŸ˜ƒ



Lets sure hope so...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read all the chapters and "WOW"...I am speechless.
I love your way with words and you're a genius seriously 
Edited by ZARNAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I was reading this series and then forgot to bookmark it and lost touch.

Thanks to Meera I am back on this thread and read all the stories again.
I have bookmarked it now.

When will these two sit down together and have a real conversation.
NK and Lavanya are caught in this web unnecessarily.
Arnav and Khushi will one day get together as it is inevitable.
This will adversely effect the other two.
Just witing for Arnav's wish to come true,



I am glad you came back to this one.

If two people really did sit down and have a conversation, world would have very few stories and our lives would be much less dramatic. People are the way they are because they really mess up in the communicating-honestly department.

Inevitability shouldn't rake up corpses of bad decisions behind it, does it? Then the inevitable is just a reflection of Dystopia.