IT is a detective story and guess what our pia is the protagonist here , the famous teenage detective . but that doesnt mean there is no trace of abhiya in the story , it is not like that , i have put equal abhiya element as i have polished mystery and suspense in the story 😃 .
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thanxx to lizo and arwa di for encouraging me
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AYUSHI
PROLOGUE:-
Pia's POV
Let me tell u about mishu to start with she is my best friend - one of them at least . Her real name is misha dobriyal .And not to forget my other best frnd Alina khurana . they are my dearest frnds in the world . Many a times people were surprised to hear that Alina and mishu are first cousin , because they were so different in every way . Alinas bubbly and girly personality contrasted with mishu no-nonsense and tom boyish manner. For Blond hazel eyed alina , a good time might be an afternoon at the mall topped off by a visit to an ice cream shop. Slim , short light Brown , curly haired misha would choose a cross - country ski trip or a visit to a rappling point .
Oh my name ? I am piyali jaiswal . maybe u have heard of me . I have solved a few mysteries around river heights , but it is not a big deal . seriously its not like I even go looking for cases .they just sort of find me . my fnds call me pia . my enemies call me lot of other things .see, I am a detective . well, not really . I mean , I don't have a license or anything . I don't carry a badge or a gun , in part because I wouldn't touch a gun even if I could and also because I am just not old enough . but I am old enough to know what something is not right, somebody is getting an unfair deal , when someone has done something they shouldn't do. And I know how to stop them, catch them and get them into the hands of the law , where they belong . I take those things seriously and I am almost never wrong . I got these instincts and skills from my father Arnab jaiswal ,an advocate by proffession and by passion too , he put his every effort in his work to make it best and that is what I like about my father.
Besides , I don't do it alone and two of the people who helps me out the most are my best frnds mishu and Alina . they are always there for me when I need them . so , when they need me I support them as when prank queen misha plays her cards , when alina needs me in exam times to teach her etc.
My friends alina amd misha might not totally agree with me . they tell me I am wrong a lot and that they have to cover me all of the time just to make me look good . alina would tell when I dress badly . I call it casual . misha would tell u I am not focused By that she would mean that once again I forgot to fill my car with gas ( CNG ) or forgot to reaharse my lines for the college drama etc. etc. But they both know I am always focused when it comes to crime .
Right now they are giving me daggers and silent threats , treatments to make me agree to go with them on their vacation trip , where I am not willing to go as I wanted to spend the rest of my vacation indoors , continuing my other hobbies - Painting , reading novels , watching documentaries and occasionally going outside with my hot stunning yet arrogant boyfriend .
I am deeply, madly in love with my boyfriend . At the mere thought of him I felt blood rushing in my cheeks and realized I was blushing .
After a while Alina again try to convince me in a pleading voice 'But pia u need a vacation to relax frm ur tiring month , our summer are about to over, isnt it so mishu she enquired from mishu , while stealing a quick glance at her ,''we should enjoy this remaining time , u are going with us , me and mishu are not going to leave u alone to let other case come up in ur hands , u are in a definite and an utter need of vacation ' misha nods in approval .
'But alina, mishu we have spent all our holidays with each other and I need a break ' I made an unsuccessful try to reason to her . '
' in solving thrilling , horror , breathtaking mysterious cases for example the mystery of the crystal dove ' , 'the case of hidden parchment ' , the case of black rose , ' the mistletoe mystery ' ... Alina interrupted . Alina had a thing in her that whenever I solve a case she gave them a highlighting name .
Before she could say anything else , i speak in between, okay okay relax , I will come with both of u''I declared .
Alina and Misha's sad face lighten up , followed by glint of joy in their eyes .
Alina's POV
I noticed pia's cheeks attaining bright scarlet shade . she was in her dreamland with her angry young man ( the nick name of her boyfriend , founder is me only ) . I know she is missing him a lot as his exams are going on and the love birds haven't talk to each other since the past two and a half weeks .
But the good news Is his exams are now over and his college too , results are yet to come , but to say that he is intelligent is an understatement . He has informed me and misha that he has planned a surprise for pia , but needs our help . He hadn't even disclose the surprise to us just requested to take pia far from river heights for the time being so he can make all the arrangements .
So here we are , pleading and begging her to come with us in the trip .
I silently prayed to god to let her enjoy the trip this time .However me and misha had learnt from experience that wherever pia went mysteries had a way of happening.
Now as she has agreed to come with us , we advanced towards the kitchen to eat the delicious pancakes made by priya , pia's caretaker as pia is half orphan . Her mother Sugandh aunty died when she was 3 from blood cancer . Priya is very sweet and lives in jaiswal mansion with nancy and arnab uncle .
as we strode past the kitchen's door Priya passed a heartwarming welcoming smile and then motioned us to start our breakfast by passing us our plates from the counter .
PIA's P.O.V
How was ur pyjama party girls ? priya asked while washing plates in which myrup syrup are still noticeable at the curvy edges . I noticed newspaper lying at the diner table neatly folded .
' That means dad had already went for office without even seeing me ' I muttered feeling a little low .
' Arnab went early at 6:15 . He got an emergency call from one of his clients while he was reading newspaper , so he had to rush . But he told me to wish u girls good morning on his behalf ' priya informed . ' sooo , what is up with my three most beautiful ladies in the world ' priya asked in dad's style, rising her chest and lowering her pitch to give it a masculine touch , placing her plate on the table .
Me , misha ,
alina stared at each other while priya
was waiting for our response , after a second we all started laughing uncontrollably, madly.
After
a joyfull breakfast misha , alina and me decided
to go for shopping in WAVE in Albemarle's ,WAVE was a special department
on the second floor catering to young adults who wanted to keep up with
the latest trends, to buy some necessities for our journey .
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