KriYansh OS: The musicals

Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

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Posted: 10 years ago

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~Unresed~

Wow Shenz... 😲

its a awesome OS... 👏

Kriya seducing Rey... Nice... 😳

and yaar concept was superb

beautifully written

see meine unres kardiya...😆

~Anu~

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Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 10 years ago

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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res
unres. . . .
Kya mai itni jaldi unres kiya 😆
i know fst page mein res. .karke bhagna is not so gud. . Bt phir bhi sorry for the late unres. .
Now coming to the update. . .
The entire concept was mindblowing. . .
I was waiting to know wat would b the end. . .bt dat ending was the highlight of the whole story. . . . Edited by sanju_arsha - 10 years ago

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Super awesum... loved it !!!!!

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sheeenzzz 🤗

Oh Freakin God, In which language should I comment.😆 You messed up all! ^_^

Babe, That was such an amazing One shot, In the start I just had no clue what it could be.. and In the end I was grinning like a fool!

WOW! You made me fall for my naughty kria again, Aww... Seducing Rey, her trainee.

But seriously, It was way too Good...^_^

And And the thing which caught me first was, TITLE, I love it,

And second thing was the way he opened the door only to fall for her more, ❤️

Fir That Kisss, way too special!

Aww... You have penned it flawlessly, You are an exceptional writer Shenz! :*

Love you! 🤗

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice os
kria trying to seduce rey
n rey being dum doesnot understand
but at last he understand
love it

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vaishali

@-Vaish-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Isn't it kind of your duty to give me the scrap that you posted an OS...

At least you owe me this much...

never mind...

awesome OS...

just loved how you showed it..

sweet and cute and seductive all laced...

i really loved how you showed the emotions and the feelings and everything..

it was beautifully crafted..

just loved the entire concept of it..

awesome...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 10 years ago

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that was a wonderful and fantastic os... loved it

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Just go and die woman!! -_-

What on earth did you write?? do you even know.

I f**king hate you and your this this.

f**k!! it made me hold my breath right from the time he opened the door.

-_- GO TO HELL !! I am not gonna read such write ups again. Itna lamba OS and starting se I was suffuring to breathe normal.

This is way to provoking . I loath you for the state I still am in. Still finding my breathe

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Pleasantly surprised with this One Shot!

It was a mixture of emotions...seducing, love, n yet reserved.

I like the way Rey was seducing him with not touches or anything but with the use of words...

I can imagine her saying n it is like picture perfect!

I can feel the flow as I read.

Seductiveness in her voice n he knowing is what is running in his mind is still controlling..

Soft n gentle bits added a special spice ;)

I liked the indirect conveying of Kria's feelings for Rey...

I loved the thoughts of Reyaansh..

They weren't hormonal teenagers who would just take the chance to feast upon each other...

I liked the maturity you hit in the characters..

It striked a balance...

I loved Kria n Rey's characterisation in this...

N the feel of romance was felt blissfully when he guides his fingers on her...

One could actually feel it ;)

Being a reader, atleast I felt! :D

All in All,

A beautifully penned down One Shot.

This can surely be counted into one of ur best's...

Your One Shots are always beautifully conceptualized.

But this is One of a Kind...

This surely has to be One of ur best One Shots for the way it was written...

The Concept would have gone down the drain if it wasn't handled this way👏👏

I am impressed! 😛

You wrote it down perfectly...

Keep Writing :)

- Snigs.

^P.s :- I can see the pen flow and happiness screaming in every word of this One Shot.

^P.P.s :- I wish a huge official confirmation will be made so that I can expect one more One Shot from u ;)

N not related to the One Shot but a normal one for u...

Sorry.*Im sure you would know why or will have an idea*

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