KriYansh OS: The musicals - Page 2

payal sood

@love_arsha

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Loved the is
Sweet
Kriya trying to seduce rey...
And rey doesn't understand ...
Atlast they confess their love...amazing

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow kriya trying to seduce rey

luv d way u show emotions

u penned it fab

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

res

unres

amazing...

this OS complimented it's title

he whole OS was in a flow..

it was simply gorgeous..

rey being a trainer and kriya seducing her...

loved her lines... And sweet is so not me. & Being gentle and soft is so not me.

( they were s well written 👏👏 ) kudos to you

but rey kitna dumb hain... samajh hi nahi paya.. 😆😆

this OS was fabulous..

please please

PM this to me fast 😳

Edited by -spongy- - 10 years ago

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889045

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

it was hot sexy full of crazyness & flirt os
awesome

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938233

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

nice os

kria is seducing rey

and hamara rey ka tha kuch samaz nahi aa raha huh dumb rey

finally usne kria ka propose kiya

awesome update

loved it

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

whoaaa...

thanks for this treat girl!! :D

ohh yuss... we have all gone insane...

infact aajkal im sweeping the forum for more n more kriyyansh stuffs to read! :D

this was indeed a treat...juz yummm😆

aww mujhe na iss mein Rey bohut pasand aaya...how he was trying to keep control and be in limits!

usse laga kriya was just attracted towards him?!! duffer kahika

in just one scene u described it all so well...kitna sab ho gaya and it jst took to be bold to take things on a different lane...

and the touch of music aur trainer - trainee relationship gave it a different flavour too..great work!

awwie loved it!! :**

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moumita

@sumimita

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

just loved it...

super like dear..

really it is way too good

kriya the naughty girl...

generally rey ko naughty rup mein dekha hai.. but kriya she is superb in naughtiness...

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

==Edited==

Okay, firstly I'm really really sorry for accusing u fr this student teacher idea..
Cuz now it feels awesome to read smthing something like this..

Well this is smthing I've been noticing in all ur works..
And I wanted to share it with u as well..
-The Dominant Female Character-
This is something I notice in all of ur works and I love it!
The strong independent bold twenty first century women.
Totally aware of what they want yet totally confused admist their feelings
And that is something I am unable to pen down

Anyways back to the OS..

Well it was nice
Her double meaning rubbish.
Lol
The start was actually good .. Rey niharing himself and then her
Uska do ghante ka beauty panel finaallly rang jamaya..
Gud Gud
Then there was that part hahaha...
Gun and all!!
Rey actually did that?? Hushing and all...!
This was a naughty yet cute conversation...!!
Okay the piano lessons .. impressive
It added a kinda Royal effect in the thing.

Im still processing the end
What happened
Actually that part 'did u mean it' was quite cool
And then hushing while kissing... my favorite part..
I don't understand how u can pen down ur emotions so gracefully.. .n
Sacchi mast tha..!
It was indeed an amazing one.

Looking forward to ur next work now..

And sorry fr the late unres and the small length cmmnt. I am online via my dab a noble now I can't write further..
Edited by Painted_Sky - 10 years ago

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