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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
 
Yr tune abhi join kia hai if, seeing ur comment fr the 1st tym shayad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jack-12

 
Yr tune abhi join kia hai if, seeing ur comment fr the 1st tym shayad

No... I am very old ๐Ÿ˜†
At least a year ๐Ÿ˜›
Actually I had comment first time on ur work... U write  SSs ... I think๐Ÿ˜•
I don't read ur works... This is ur first OS I had read ๐Ÿ˜ณAnd I liked it 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Btw it will be nice to have friendship with you... ๐Ÿ˜Š
I am Aliza ... Friends call me Lizo ๐Ÿ˜ณ
What's ur name??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ---Lizo---

No... I am very old ๐Ÿ˜†
At least a year ๐Ÿ˜›
Actually I had comment first time on ur work... U write  SSs ... I think๐Ÿ˜•
I don't read ur works... This is ur first OS I had read ๐Ÿ˜ณAnd I liked it 

 
 
Yup n thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Your welcum ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: vmpy

fantastic n amazing job dude.loved it.

brilliant take on schizophrenic patients.
as piya lost her parents n she was lonely n there came abhay who soothed her but da med started wrking n her most beloved companion stopped visiting her.a v heart touching indeed

 
Yr tune to puri kahani chan shabon mei keh dali๐Ÿ˜†
Thnx๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jack-12

 
Yr tune to puri kahani chan shabon mei keh dali๐Ÿ˜†
Thnx๐Ÿ˜ƒ

seriously i loved it da depth,da pain,da hurt.brilliant portrayal of emotions
once i met a schizophrenic pt at psychiatry ward n he was in a delusion dat someone was following him n trying to kill him n he was so sure of dat.today u reminded me of dat patient.u presented a v harsh reality in a v brilliant way
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: jack-12


Yr tune to puri kahani chan shabon mei keh dali๐Ÿ˜†
Thnx๐Ÿ˜ƒ


apki tarah hi medical student hai plus law bhi padh rahe hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
bhai , kya kahoon , i cant accept abhay as a mere hallucination of pia , i want him in flesh and blood in ur story .
 
i cant imagine pia in  so much heartbroken state , the pain is unbearable  for me , do write a second part bhai , make abhay real ,

now that pia has recovered bring a real abhay in the story plzzz
kisi aur avatar mein hi sahi but bring him and make them unite , i cant stand the sad ending .

the plot was good bhai , indeed it was ๐Ÿ‘ but i felt it incomplete ๐Ÿ˜ญ and bhai movie mein toh bipasha ko bhi koi mil gaya tha na , continue the story with the movie track
.๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: vmpy

seriously i loved it da depth,da pain,da hurt.brilliant portrayal of emotions

once i met a schizophrenic pt at psychiatry ward n he was in a delusion dat someone was following him n trying to kill him n he was so sure of dat.today u reminded me of dat patient.u presented a v harsh reality in a v brilliant way

 
thank u so much๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This means a lot