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Part 11.

Mallika and Armaan reached the temple.It is beautiful temple of Aashapuri mata.

Mandir bahoot hi sundar aur shant tha.Mallika aur Armaan ka dil khush ho gaya.Bus har jagah pe jay mata ji ki dhun sunai de rahi the aur unke dil ko sukun mil raha tha.

Armaan aur Mallika ne darshankiye aur woh bahar aake mandir ke parisar me baithe.

Armaan: kitni shanti hai na yahaa mallika?

Mallika:Armaan mandir me aate hi log sare dukh dard bhul jate hai.Bus dil me aastha honi chahiye.

Armaan: sahi kahaa tumne.




Ashutosh : Nidhi,chalo ab main tumhe hotel chhod du?

Nidhi:  kyon?itni jaldi?

Ashutosh:woh main tumhe batana bhul gaya ki meri 2 baje duty hai.

Nidhi: theek hai toh fir.chhod dijiye [aur usne apne aasoo chhupane ki koshish ki]

Ashutosh ne dekha aur bola,"Nidhi,chhoda labj mat use karo na?it hurts.Main tumhe drop karoonga,chhodunga nahi kabhi.Believe me.

Nidhi:Abhi toh aap ja rahe hai aur kal me chali jaoongi.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,Humne kya tay kiya tha?be strong please.

Nidhi: theek hai main koshish karoongi.

Ashutosh ne Nidhi ko drop kiya.Aur usne mudke dekha toh Nidhi use wave kar rahi thi.Ashutosh ne apni udasi chhupai aur woh aankhose ozal ho gaya.

thodi der ke baad ashu ko realize hua ki Nidhi ka bag ko back seat pe reh gaya.Mallika ne nidhi ko call kiya aur uske pas phone reh gaya lekin bag woh gadi me bhul gai.

Ashutosh bag lautane wapis muda.

Aur usne apni gadi hotel ke aage roki.Reception pe use Jyotika mili.Woh kahi ja rahi thi.

Ashutosh: Dr Jyotika,hi.woh yeh bag Nidhi tak.

Tabhi jyotiaka ne beech me hi baat kaat di aur boli,"sorry major,woh main bahar ja rahi hoo.Nidhi apne kamareme hai aap use hi de dijiye na?

Ashutosh hichkichahat se Nidhi ke kamare ki taraf gaya.

Nidhi was weaping and talking on phone,"Anji,kya karoo ashutosh ke samne toh apne aasoo chhupa leti hoo.Lekin ab toh judai ke naam se dar lagta hai.Main unhe bata nahi sakti ki main kitna chahti hu unhe.Masti aur majaak me bol chuki hoo lekin ab dar lagta hai judai se.Aaj itna waqt gujarne ke baad bhi lagta hai ki muzse kuchh chhut raha hai.koi mera apna.

Anji,tumhe pata hai na ki maine bachpan me kitne sapne dekhe the.Woh bilkul usi ke jaise hai.Bahooot sweet,bahoot pyare.pata nahi kyon unhe sab khadoos kyon kehte hai?

Ashutosh was watching and he was listening it 

Nidhi: Ha Anji.di ki baat toh hum kar lenge.Lekin mera kya hoga?tab tak main kya karoongi? i just hate this seperation.Muze unse dur nahi jana Anji.

Now ashu became so emotional that he couldn't control himself and came toh Nidhi.Stilll she was talking and weaping.

Ashutosh ne uska phone chhin liya aur cut karke dheere se bed par rakha.

Isse pahele Nidhi kuchh samaz paye Ashutohs ne use hug kiya aur paheli baar usne Nidhi ko kaskar gale se lagaya.

Nidhi:Major aap yahaa?Muze pata hai ki ab aap yahi kahenge ki humari duty hai act,act.Lekin dil ka kya karoo?

Ashutosh: nahi Nidhi,main ab tumhe samazne laga hu.Tumhari har wish ko main puri karna chahta hoo.Ab tum batao tum kya chahti ho?

Nidhi: kuchh nahi ji.thoda upset ho gai thi.I am normal now.Aur duty comes first.Aap jaiye.

Ashutosh: chala toh jaoonga.Lekin tumse ek baat kehena chahta hu Nidhi.Main bhi tumhe bahoot miss karta hoo aur tumse dur jana nahi chahta.Lekin humari majboori yeh hai ki hume pahele bhai aur mallika ji ki shadi karwani hai sorry bhabhi ki.Agar tum abhi chahti ho toh main bhai se apni baat kar leta hoo.

Nidhi: nahi abhi nahi.But i am going to miss you.

Ashutosh: Me too going to miss you dear.

And ashu left.

Armaan aur Mallika laut rahe hai.They both are in car.

Armaan: Mallika,kal tum chali jaogi.Toh kyon na aaj hum sab milke enjoy karte hai.Sham ko kahi dinner pe chalte hai.Tum main Nidhi aur meri jaan chhote.Lekin uska bharosa nahi.Na bhi bol sakta hai.

Malllika: shayad aa bhi jaye.You never know.

Armaan: ha aajkal woh surprise ke zatke pe zatke de raha hai.Paarty me bhi bhoot ki tarah pragat hua tha woh.Bhul gai?

Mallika: aa gaye toh muze badi khushi hogi.

Armaan: abhi se itni chinta?

Mallika: chinta toh karoongi na?

Armaan : toh done.sham ko 8 baje lene aaoonga.


Armaan came to Ashutosh 

Armaan: Ashu,humne sham ko dinner pe jane ka plan banaya hai.Chalega kya saath me?

Ashtuosh : Nhi bhai.bus thak gaya hu aaram karna chahta hoo.

Armaan: are chal na?majaa aayega.

Ashu: tum aur bhabhi ja rahe ho.Muze kyon ghasit rahe ho?

Armaan: hum sab matlab Mallika,main ,Nidhi

Ashutosh [Nidhi ka naam sunkar] Nidhi,matlab sab aa rahe hai?

Armaan: wohi toh main keh raha hoo.Chalega?

Ashtuosh: theek hai bhai.sab chal rahe hai toh main bhi aaoonga.

Armaan,Mallika,ashutosh,nidhi and all are sitting in garden area.

Armaan: Ashutosh,kuchh hua hai kya?tu muze thoda badala hua najar aata hai.

Ashu: kuchh nahi bhai.woh thoda thak gaya hoo.

Tabhi Armaan ne Mallika ke kaan me kuchh kahaa aur woh gadi ki taraf gaya.

Armaan: Attention everybody.Mahol ko thoda rangeen banane ke liye main apne bhai se request karta hoo ki woh koi pyaari dhun violin par bajaye.

Ashutosh: nahi bhai,yeh kya?bali ka bakra muze kyon banate ho?

Mallika: please ashu,bajao na?

Ashutosh: theek hai.

Ashutosh ne teerchhi najaro se nidhi ko dekha aur usne violin pe dhun chhedi

Pyaar karte hai hum tumhe itna
Do aankhe toh kya do jahaa me samaye na jitna


Aur Nidhi ne ashu ki taraf chauk ke dekha.

Mallika : Aap bahoot achhi violin bajate ho.Please meri farmaish ka bhi gana baja do

Ashu: kahiye

Mallika: mera pyaar bhi tu hai yeh bahar bhi tu hai 

Aur ashu ne woh dhun bhi bajayee.

Nidhi: ab meri farmaish.

Ashutohs: aap bhi farmaish kar hi dijiye.

Nidhi: mera gana hai,"muze tum yaad krna aur muzko yaad aana tum

Ashutosh ne woh bhi dhun baja di.

Aur fir last me sab logo ne bahoot masti ki

Armaan: chalo ab hume chalna chahiye.Inki bhi subah train hai.Ashutosh ,main in sabko train me bithakar aaoonga.

Ashutosh: bhai,main bhi ao kya?

Armaan:tu aayega?

Ashutosh: ji bhai.

Armaan chal theek hai aaja.Abhi main gadi nikalta hoo.

Ashtosh came to Nidhi and he whispers in her ears,"sapno me aana aur meri raah dekhna.

Aur usne dheere se nidhi ke liye gana gaya,"hum tere bin kahi reh nahi sakte.Tum nahi aate toh hum mar jate.Pyar kya cheej hai yeh jaan nahi pate.

Hope you all like this chap

Edited by parmarA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hi Alka

How are you? I have read chapter 9, but not chapter 10. I will write review after I finish with the birthday thread. Hope you do not mind?

Have you read my last chapter? 😛

don't worry aardhan,i will wait for your review.
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

GM and JSK Alkaben. Kem Chho?? Maja ma ne?? 😃



Hu majama chhu tupu.Tu kem chhe?
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Hi Alka di, just read the lovely update.. i will review later..😊
But what a fantabulous way of expressions shown.. I think after this violin scene.. Armaan will come to know abt them thoda thoda.. 
Train miss ho jani chahiye Nidhi aur Mallika ki... 😛😉
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Thanks for the update 😊

Will read it 2morrow morning!!
Edited by Diksha_1991 - 10 years ago
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Lovely update Alka di ! 👏
Love to see Armaan n Mallika praying at the temple ! PPl come n forget their pains.. Bas Astha honi chahiye ! ⭐️
Nidhi got tears in her eyes to see that Ashu is going to drop her and not " chhod deta hoon.." There is a lot of difference in saying ! This bond is progressing with the time.. Love to see that they both cant live without each other n gonna miss a lots ! ❤️ Love has covered them fully.. !
Ashu's hearing Nidhi talking to Anji, shook him totally that he hugged her tightly n promised ..

Ashutosh: chala toh jaoonga.Lekin tumse ek baat kehena chahta hu Nidhi.Main bhi tumhe bahoot miss karta hoo aur tumse dur jana nahi chahta.Lekin humari majboori yeh hai ki hume pahele bhai aur mallika ji ki shadi karwani hai sorry bhabhi ki.Agar tum abhi chahti ho toh main bhai se apni baat kar leta hoo.

Nidhi: nahi abhi nahi.But i am going to miss you.

O my my.. what a lovely scene ...  ❤️
I somewhat laughed on Ashu's gesture... waise saaheb ko nahi aanaa Dinner pe.. but agar Nidhi aa rahi hai toh janaab ready ho gaye.. This happens...  pyaar mein aisa hi hota hai.. 😛😉
Armaan is collecting some thing from all this.. i think usse kuch kuch lagne lagaa hai,, right Di.. 😛😃
Loved to see Ashu playing violin on the songs for every one's choice.. N now he is all set to send them off at Railway station as well.. 😉 Armaan ko shaq hua hi samjho.. 😛⭐️

Ashtosh came to Nidhi and he whispers in her ears,"sapno me aana aur meri raah dekhna.

Aur usne dheere se nidhi ke liye gana gaya,"hum tere bin kahi reh nahi sakte.Tum nahi aate toh hum mar jate.Pyar kya cheej hai yeh jaan nahi pate.
Our Ashu has become more n more Romantic with Nidhi now .. loved the way he whispered in Nidhi's ears n the lovely n apt song later.. Wow ! Alka di, you have made this OS a pure n very romantic one.. i am loving it.. But plzz di.. mera kehna maan jao.. 
Let Nidhi n Mallika's train miss.. let them miss it .. plzzz 😳
You know di,., you have described each n every scene so thoughtfully that i can watch them saying all that n Ashu playing the violin.. Lovely scenario shown by you.. what a move.. !!! 
Waiting to know how they are gonna take their parting from now.. 
Thanks di ! 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hi Alka di, just read the lovely update.. i will review later..😊

But what a fantabulous way of expressions shown.. I think after this violin scene.. Armaan will come to know abt them thoda thoda.. 
Train miss ho jani chahiye Nidhi aur Mallika ki... 😛😉

Thank you Bawa. Train agar miss ho gai toh Ashu rules nahi od payega.Aur fir woh pyaar se jengleman se mentleman nahi ban payega.Ab toh woh kaise lucknow ke chakkar lagayega dekhna dilchasp rahega.
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you tasha
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Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Thanks for the update 😊


Will read it 2morrow morning!!

Thank you Diksha.will wait for your review.