thanks so much for the praise Ria.😳unres...
hmmm... a really very different genre of story... liked it...😊there was a mysterious environment throughout the whole first chapter... be it the first appearance of pia... the huge manor in which she is so alone and almost prison... the man with blue eyes who despise beautiful stuffs everything has a touch of unknown mystery which hooks me to it...pia's past story, her feeling about her father was so amazing part... i liked the part most in the story..the huge manor, the unknown husband suddenly remembered me about my fav fairy tale beauty and the beast...before some years i saw a russian movie <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">'panna a netvor'</font>... based on beauty and beast.. this os reminds me about that movie...and lastly thx for another wonderfull story di...take care..ria😊
welcome Dishu!Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
thanks for this OS indu and will wait for the other updates too.
self loathing?..umm..well am nt so sure abt that! U will knw things soon!Originally posted by: devilish-grin
quite a gripping story
so pia is married to abhay but she hadn't seen him...
abhay has all the self loathing stuff n thinks that beautiful things r all evil n bad...hmmm
lets see how they fall in love😳
yes u are right dear. Pia is in troubled state. Am glad u could feel her helplessness.Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
awesome , feeling sad for pia , the man who married with her ( pia ) still she not married becuz he never give love to pia n man is none other than abhay , waiting for nxt update , thanks or pm n continue soon
Thanks dear. Will soon update. Sure..Will pm u!😊 thanks for reading.😳Awesome story. PM me pls.
thanks very much.😳its ok. Study comes first.read whenever u can.😊Originally posted by: karamjeet
Awesome OS dear...i also apply u soon in ur other OS nd ff's too dear at now own i'm little busy with my exams...nd Thanksss 4 PM 4 all links of ur work...
thanks for liking.😳u'r most welcome! Will update this week. 😊Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
Awsm os. Next part jaldi update krna. Thax fr pm.
thanks a ton dear...🤗Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Waiting for Like ur writing skill forever Dear🤗
I will try to update soon dear n complete it as soon as i can. :)Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
omg its looking great i am so much excited
very well written plz updater regularly and so so so early🤗
thanks dear. I hope u will like the story further as well.😳Originally posted by: sukuvivu
its amazing...wud love to read all parts soon.. y abhay is like that n y pias condition like tht..i dnt want her alone.when abhiya getting togethr...waiting/..
thanks for reading n appreciating megha.😳Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
interesting concept.
liked the start.felt bad for pia not only she lost her father but also sacrificed her dreams for her family only to get more and more pain..wonder why abhay wouldn't even talk to her or see her??it seems something has happened in his past that made him like this but still it's not an excuse to treat someone this way.waiting to read more
nope.definitely no more FF right nw. :POriginally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
My god Indu, why is this not an FF :(
beautifully done. I love love love this masterpiece and PLEASE update soon!!!!
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