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Posted: 11 years ago
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I've always been a silent reader.I just imagined this in my mind.I'm writing an OS for the first time so there will be many mistakes.Sorry for that.Hope you guys will like it..

Jalal and Jodha are now in love.They have expressed all their feelings before each other.
Jalal was heading towards Jodha's room.He was so tired after the whole day's work.Jalal to himself,"Now finally,i can meet my Jodha.Ya Allah i'm so tired,really it was such a busy day!.I just wanna see her face and I'm sure I will get boosted up".He had reached before her room.He opened the big door and with a smile he enters the room,but he was amazed by the scene in her room.The whole room was full of ladies and that too all were looking the same.He was very confused.
"Pranaam shahenshah",Moti entered the room.
'Shahenshah you're looking confused.Don't worry this is your Jodha beegum's room".
Jalal to mothi,"then who are these ladies?Why are they looking same??And where's Jodha?????
Mothi:Shahenshah this is a small game.Jodha wants you to win this game.
Jalal:Game???What game????
Mothi:Shahensha you have to find your Jodha from these ladies,you have 3 chances if you wins you canstay tonight with Jodha if you will loose you can't spend the night with her.
Jalal:Jodha...You won't change..ok I'm ready to play.
Mothi:There are some conditions,Neither you can touch anyone nor you can see their faces.
Jalal:Brilliant,I have to say my beegum is very tough,but I'm shahenshah I will win this
Jalal looked at everyone."What will I do everyone's looking like the same
he then saw a fruit basket aside and a knife beside the basket.He smirked at the ladies before him.He hurts himself with the knife.Suddenly one lady runs and comes before him.She holds his hand."What have you done Shahenshah?.Why did you hurt yourself?Moti go bring medicines and fast".Mothi brings medicines and the lady bandages jalal's wounds.
Jalal(smiling):Now here is my jodha beegum who loves me more than anything in the world
Jodha removes the dupatta covering her face
Jodha:This is not fair.You can't play tricks like that
Jalal turns back:Takliya
Everyone goes out of the room.
Jalal:But i have won the game Jodha Beegum.The conditions was that I can't see or touch anyone.You never told that I can't use any tricks
Jodha:So what?You won by cheating.
Jalal:Jodha Beegum please why are you wasting our time.Whole day i was waiting for this moment.And now why you are doing like this.
He comes closer to her and holds her waist.
Jalal:Jodha now no other words.I'm so tired.Give me some peace,I want the warmth of your body, the sweetness of your lips.
He cups her cheeks and slowly comes closer.JOdha smiles and she leaves his hands and walks from there.
Jalal(frustrated):Jodha...
Jodha:Shahenshah you know what ,you are so impatient.If you will go like this then how can you be a good ruler?.Patience is the quality of a good ruler.
Jalal:Jodha why are you telling all this now?Please i don't wanna waste even a minute with you. What happenend to you today usually you don't talk such things.
Jodha:This is your problem.If I'm behaving unusually then there will be something special na? Just think shahenshah do i have anything to tell?
Jalal:I don't know what's wrong with you.If you have anything to say then say it directly why are you dragging it?
Jodha:Shahenshah it's time for you to become a patient,caring and loving person
Jalal:Why?Am i not a loving,caring person?
Jodha:Yes but you are loving and caring only towards those whom you love
Jalal:Oh so you want me to share my love and care to my other beegums also
Jodha:I didn't actually mean that.You have to share you love and care so that the upcoming generations also become a good and noble king.
Jalal:Jodha Beegum you have gone mad.It's my humble request to you please don't waste time like this.If this goes like this then i will have to wait another whole day for you.
Jodha:Shahenshah just think,when will a wife talks like this to her husband?
Jalal:I don't know tell me when ?
Jodha:A wife talks like this to her husband when someone's going to come
Jalal:Jodha Beegum don't worry we will welcome whoever comes from Amer.
Jodha:Ohhffooo Shahenshah...Ok fine.The one who is coming he is half of amer and half of agra.
Jalal:Oh he lives at borders of Amer and Agra?
Jodha:There's no use of talking to you
Jalal:Jodha you are absolutely right.S stop talking to me and come closer
Jodha:Just leave it I'll tell.The one who is coming he comes from us.
Jalal:Jodha...I didn't get it
Jodha:Badshah Jalaludhheen Muhammed you are gonna be a father.Mughal dynasty will soon get it's successor.
Jalal:Is it true?Jodha
Jodha:Do you think that i'm lieing?
Jalal:I'm so happy Jodha
Jalal hugs her tightly.He holds her cheekss.
Jalal:Finally I got this news.Thank you very much Jodha for making me a father
Jodha:I'm also happy that your dream is finally gonna be true because of me
Jodha leans on his chest.
Jodha:Shahenshah If I'll ask for something then will oyou give it?
Jalal:If you will ask for my life then i won't give because i want to live my whole life with you and our child.
Jodha:Promise me that you won't ever argur or quarrel with me.I feel bad when I'm away from you
Jalal:I promise Beegum Jodha..No Beegum Mariyam uz Zamani that i won't ever go away from you.I don't know why but this time when i heard that I'm gonna be a father I'm a little more happy.
Jodha:That's because this small shahenshah in my womb is the sign of our love.
Jalal smiles and looks at his wife.
Jalal:You know what Jodha now you have become more beautiful.I still don't believe that you're mine.
Jodha:You have to shahenshah.Not only me but this small shahenshah also.
Jalal:I love you jodha
Jodha:Love you too
Slowly their lips comes closer.Now they have become one.Two bodies and one soul.They were burning in the fire of love.The cold breeze that blew all over Agra cooled the whole city but not their love..The End

Sorry for mistakesSmile.Hope you guys will like it.Please comment




Edited by indhulakshmi - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ausome... This shuld happen in show also... It will become d best scene of JA... Dialogues were also superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow really nice, this scene is so cute, loved it, please do continue to write if you have time, great job!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaisoif

Wow really nice, this scene is so cute, loved it, please do continue to write if you have time, great job!!!


I'll surely write if everyone likes my writingsss😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice and cute 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS there ... 👏
Jala was so cute he din get what Jodha was trying to tell him ... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all for the compliments😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome OS...👏
Can't believe it ur
First try...
Loved it...👍🏼

Hope we get to see sum of d scenes
In JA...😉
Bt ders a While to go before dat...

Do cont soon wid more
Such OS's...
Bdw m Soniya 😃
N u...????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superbbb veee
this is ur first one and still u did such a wonderful job
im happy that you tried something ,... hamesha sunati ho ... abh i got chance to read also 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please buddy me and send me ur works😉
Edited by arshiar8 - 11 years ago

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