Arnav & Khushi FF || Serendipity #1 || Link to Thread Two: Pg 1

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Yes. Hate me. By all means. Go ahead. Cause I deserve it entirely for expecting anything on this writing without finishing my other works. BUT. I needed to start this. The story bloomed in my head and I needed to pen it. This is just a teaser, for now, but this story will not stop. I promise, I won't let it. Even if it garners 2 readers, I will continue this.

 And neither will my other works... because I believe in completion. I will finish them all. Even the ones on indefinite hold. 

But for now, I hope you will enjoy this little teaser of

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~Serendipity~
"an accidental discovery"

Khushi felt a shiver run down her spine as the biting chill of the evening breeze slipped under the comforter Arnav had thrown at her for the night. Her teeth rattled stubbornly as the hair on her arms stood to attention, urging for her to stand up and knock on the locked french doors, to plead for entrance into a bedroom that offered warm water and a warm bed. 

But no. 

She had been confined to the life of a prisoner who had committed the most heinous crime. Punished under the reign of a husband who refused to listen and mocked every night by the reflection of a destroyed woman staring into the depths of a calm poolside. The dark circles and pasty complexion that darkened her once ruddy face... the monotony of a once enchanting laughter. 

They were testimony to the temporary sham that was her six month wedding. Khushi had withered away by the rejection, and all that was left was a hollow shell of a wife watching her husband as he turned in his sleep, dreaming of a happier world where she knew she didn't exist. She laughed at the irony, as the first drops of rain of the impending storm above her head mingled with the tears of the constant storm raging within her heart.


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I know. This is disgustingly and unforgivably short. But I am asking for a comment significantly shorter. A word, even a like will do. Please. Please. Please. Comment on what you think so far, and what you'd like to read. Chapter One will be here soon. 

Thank you

Zee

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TEASER/PROLOGUE: A B O V E 

CHAPTER ONE: F R I C T I O N 

CHAPTER TWO:  U N C E R T A I N T Y

CHAPTER THREE: V I R I L I T Y

CHAPTER FOUR: S H A T T E R E

CHAPTER FIVE: V I C T O R Y 

CHAPTER SIX: F I D G E

CHAPTER SEVEN: J E S T 

CHAPTER EIGHT: D E S T R U C T I O N

CHAPTER NINE: H I N D S I G H T

CHAPTER TEN: B E L L E

CHAPTER ELEVEN: A L T E R

CHAPTER TWELVE: C O N S I D E R A T I O

CHAPTER THIRTEEN: S P I T

CHAPTER FOURTEEN: S U C C U M B

CHAPTER FIFTEEN: S A T I A T E

CHAPTER SIXTEEN: N O T H I N G 

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN: C O M A T O S

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN: S E D A T E D

CHAPTER NINETEEN: T R I U M P H 




|| L I N K   T O   T H R E A D   T W O || 


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serendipitylove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sounds very promising...Is it an Arnav redemption FF??
If it is, by all means please go ahead and I'd like to be part of the journey too...
I only hope the updates come regularly 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Holy Shit Zee...you are such an awesome writer!!!! πŸ˜³ πŸ˜† I loved the way you described Khushi's feelings towards the situation!!! I could literally feel Khushi's pain!!! 

I can't wait to read more...

Is this going to be an accidental discovery of Shyaam's truth? 
Discovery of Arnav's feelings towards Khushi?
Discovery of the fact that Khushi can, for once, think about herself?
And now I am just blabbing!!! 🀣

Sometimes things make sense in my head but not when I write them out!!! -_- πŸ˜›

Can't wait to read more...

Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely teaser can't wait to read further.Edited by -iLoveSobti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice teaser
would like to read more
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nice
eagerly waiting
hope u vl cont soon
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Looking forward to this . πŸ˜Š
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ipk track????
lovely.. :)
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I have been an irregular updater in the past, but I promise to try to update this FF regularly. 😊Thank you so much for the comment. 
As for the redemption, for that you will need to keep reading πŸ˜ƒ

 

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Sounds very promising...Is it an Arnav redemption FF??
If it is, by all means please go ahead and I'd like to be part of the journey too...
I only hope the updates come regularly 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lazy! <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much yaar. πŸ€— 
Can I say it's a combination of all three? πŸ€” Don't want to give anything away πŸ˜ˆThank you so much for the sweet comment <3 Love you <3 

Originally posted by: LazilyAnonymous

Holy Shit Zee...you are such an awesome writer!!!! πŸ˜³ πŸ˜† I loved the way you described Khushi's feelings towards the situation!!! I could literally feel Khushi's pain!!! 


I can't wait to read more...

Is this going to be an accidental discovery of Shyaam's truth? 
Discovery of Arnav's feelings towards Khushi?
Discovery of the fact that Khushi can, for once, think about herself?
And now I am just blabbing!!! 🀣

Sometimes things make sense in my head but not when I write them out!!! -_- πŸ˜›

Can't wait to read more...

Continue soon!!!

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