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OS: The other shoulder - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
The writing, the flow is sardonic in the sense that it brings out the brutality of life, and heart break. Lavanya, in true spirits rose to the occasion as she had the maturity and sense in her to go away, without it being ugly. 
This piece was overwhelming to the point that you could acutely bring out Lavanya's perspective, not make one hate her. Rather I empathized with her, and could feel the same way she felt. 

Beautiful and keen sense of writing. Love it absolutely.

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Posted: 8 years ago
I dont recall reading anything like this before. An OS from Lavanya's POV. Brilliant job done RB.
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Posted: 8 years ago
this is an awesome one shot.
i love this line
She carries a heavy bag on one shoulder and the weight of the world on the other.