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vibhaaa

@vibhaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome poem... Written so beautifully ... Really define the meaning of love.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Nice poemEdited by _Maggie_ - 10 years ago

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hey Mohina 😊

sorry for the late comment yaar

superb, brilliant poem

really loved it ❤️

it is penned very beautifully ❤️

u emotes the emotions so exceptionally

i have become your writing fan wo bhi proud fan 😉

awesome job 👍🏼

congratulations for a such good piece of work 👏

keep up the great work 😊

do write more and more bcoz wants to read more from u

thanks for the PM and do PM me...

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

ammazing yar...i jst luvv ur poemms...!!

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864484

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: anagharaj
bahut hi khubsoorat likha hai, pyaar ke baare main
jo bhi kaha vo sach hai. u write very superb.

isseliya shayad hum aaj bhi taarey ko unke pyaar ko
dekhne ki liye taras rahe hai.

please update ur all ff/ss, especially Hum mar jayangee,
it touch my heart. i like that very much, padte waqt ek alag
ehsas hota hai aur usme main dub jati ho, bahut hi
emotional aur romantic he vo, please jaldi upate karo.

This poem is very well written, each line clearly mentions
the true meaning of love.

thanks

aww dil se thank u so so so so so much my sweet cute dear friend 😛

i m so glad that u like it 😃 thanks a lot sweetu , it really means a lot 2 me ,

yaa u r right main bhi taarey ko dekhne ke liye taras gayi hun 😭😭 i really miss them a lot 😭

yaa i will try 2 update asap , really sorry 2 make u wait but kya karun ,stuck with this health n studies😭 ,sorry , but ya i will try 2 update it n all 😛

aww dil se thank u so much , and main bhi likhte waqt usmein full to doob jaati hun 😛

its close 2 my heart , i also love writing that story n all but time shortage 😭 solly

thank u so much 4 ur special , & precious comment , dil se thank u , it really means a lot 2 me 😳😳😳

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Soo beautifully wriiten
wotever u mention ol r soo true
keep writing dear
u r amazing writer
w8ing for u FFs

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864484

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: velvetrose
Wow what a poem
I loved it .. u described the
Meaning of beautifully
Amazingly written

thank u so so so so so much dear 😊😊

i m so glad that u love my poem 😳

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864484

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: kriti094
Really amazing poetry
u define love perfectly

thank u so much dear 😊😊😊

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864484

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ..Shanae..
wow didu!! Its an amazing poem!
I loved every bit of it!
It defines love so beautifully and perfectly...

PS. I hope yeh apne adhi raat ko nahi lihka 😡

Love u a lot!! Muaah muaah muaah!! 🤗 huggs!
Tc. Hope ur health improves! All the best for studiez :)

~Your's ❤️

😆😆😆 actually shonu i dont remember that at what time i wrote this poem ,as it has been so many days since i wrote it but ya i posted it at night only 😆😆 pls dont get angry

thank u so so so so much shonu ,😳😳

i m so glad that u loved it 😃

🤗love u too baby sis muaah muaah muaaahhh muaahh 🤗

u too tc , n all d best 2 u too 4 ur studies 😊

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864484

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: QTPie99
wow dii
amazing i'm in ove with ur writing skill
plz keep writing n plz PM me as well...
love u dii
aap ki crazy se behen
❤️ Surabhi ❤️

oh my god , 😲 really u love my writing ???? 😛😛

thank u so so much sweetu

muaahhh muaahhh muaahh 🤗

love u too meri pyaari se sweetu sis surabhi 😳😳

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