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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey friends  ,  
here   i  present  u  one  more  poem  ,  of  course   written  by  ur  moni  😆😆  , so  u  have  2  read  it  ,  no   other option 😛😛 . and  pls  comment  as  well   4  me   n  my  writing  😳😳  (AND  YA  MAY  BE  I  WILL  WRITE  A  TAAREY   OS  ON  IT {MAY BE}😉 , DONT  KNOW  WHEN  🤣  ,  NO  TIME   U  SEE  , 😆😆  N  MOREOVER  SO  MANY   PENDING  STORIES  , SO  KEEP  WAITING  😛😛 SORRY  2  MAKE   U  WAIT  BUT  I  REALLY  CANT  HELP IT , U  ALL  KNOW  MY  HEALTH  NA  😭 )

a poem ~~PYAAR  HAI ~~ (in  hindi )

kuch  rishte aise  hote  hain , 
          jo  tootkar  bhi  kabhi  toot te  nahi  .
kuch  log  aise  hote  hain , 
          jo  door  hokar bhi   door  hote  nahi  ,

vo  rishte  pyaar  ke   khoobsurat  rishte hote  hain  ,  
     aur  vo  insaan hamein  bahut  he  pyaare  hote  hain

kuch aise  andekhe anjaane dilon ke  rishte hote hain ,
          jo  do  dilon ko  pyaar ki  atoot  dor se  jodte  hain ,

pyaar  ki  khushboo se  dilon  ko  mehkate  hain  , 
pyaar  ki  goonj se dilon  ko  dhadkate  hain  , 
pyaar  ki  mishri  se  dilon  main  ghul  jaate  hain  , 

(hmmm   aahahaha  oo  ho  ho  ho  ho  )

jab kisi ke  liye  duayein  apne aap  hotho(lips) pe aane  lagein,
dil  ki  khamoshiyon  main  aawaz  kisi ki goonjne lage, 
dil ki dhadkano  main  dard sang  ishq  bhi  dhadakne lage  ,
koi  ajnabee  ehsaas  hamein  sukoon  dene  lage  , 
to  samjh  lo  , 😉
        pyaar   main  hum  deewane  hone  lage 😳😳

jab  kisi ki  khushiyan  , zindagi  hamari banne  lage , 
kisi ka  pyaar  hamare  jeene  ki  vajah banne  lage, 
tab  samjh  lo , 
         pyaar  main  hum  deewane  hone lage  😉

kaisa  ye pyaar  ka deewanapan hai , 
   dard  usko  (beloved )  hota  hai , 
par  uska  ehsaas  mujhe main  rota  hai  ,  

haa  uski  saanse  , uski  dhadkan  aur  ..  vo  he  to  
mera  wajood  banne  laga  hai  , 
uski  khushiyon ke  liye  ,
kuch  bhi  kar jaane  ko  mann  karne laga hai  ,  
kaisa  ,  haa   kaise   ye  pyaar  ka  deewanapan  hai  ,
  khud ki   ab na  koi  khabar  hai  

HAA  PYAAR  HAI  ,  PYAAR  HAI  ,  PYAAR  HAI  ,  
BE-INTEHAAN  ,   BEPANAH  , SACHA  PYAAR  HAI   ...
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OK OK  END  OF   MY  POETRY  , I  KNOW   U   ALL   MUST  BE  FEELING  SUPERBORED  BUT  PLS  DO  LIKE  AS WELL AS  COMMENT  FROM  HEART  BEFORE   GOING   ,  IF  U WANT  2  READ  MY  WRITING  MORE  😛



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaahh... I'm the first one to comment!!!! Coming back to your poem... it was nice and you explained the meaning of love wonderfully. Hats off to you for writing this poem.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharMarfan1

Yaahh... I'm the first one to comment!!!! Coming back to your poem... it was nice and you explained the meaning of love wonderfully. Hats off to you for writing this poem.


Thank  u  so   so  so  so  much  my  sweet cute dear  buddy  , 
🤗   it really  means  a  lot  2  me  , 😊😊 
dil  se thank  u  😳😳
😊😊  i  m  so  glad  that  u  like   my  poem 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ... really amazing ... m in luv wid ol ur poems... really well written... thnx a lot for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirudawda

Wow ... really amazing ... m in luv wid ol ur poems... really well written... thnx a lot for pm...


😛  omg  😲 , really  u  love  my poems  ??? 😛  
 thats  was  quite  unexpected  , 😆
 i  m  so glad  2  know  that  u  love  my  poems 😃
it  really  means a  lot  2  me   😳
  dil  se  thank u  so  much  my  sweetu  buddy 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
bahut hi khubsoorat likha hai, pyaar ke baare main
jo bhi kaha vo sach hai. u write very superb.

isseliya shayad hum aaj bhi taarey ko unke pyaar ko
dekhne ki liye taras rahe hai.

please update ur all ff/ss, especially Hum mar jayangee,
it touch my heart. i like that very much, padte waqt ek alag
ehsas hota  hai aur usme main dub jati ho,  bahut hi
emotional aur romantic  he vo, please jaldi upate karo.

This poem is very well written, each line clearly mentions
the true meaning of love.

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Wow what a poem 
I loved it .. u described the
Meaning of beautifully
Amazingly written  
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Really amazing poetry
u define love perfectly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow didu!! Its an amazing poem!
I loved every bit of it!
It defines love so beautifully and perfectly...

PS. I hope yeh apne adhi raat ko nahi lihka 😡

Love u a lot!! Muaah muaah muaah!! 🤗 huggs!
Tc. Hope ur health improves! All the best for studiez :)

~Your's ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
wow dii
amazing i'm in ove with ur writing skill
plz keep writing n plz PM me as well...
love u dii
aap ki crazy se behen
❤️ Surabhi ❤️