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Part two
He was walking toward his car when he heard his dad and Advoot talking
NA: itni jaldi kia hai jaane ki tumhe?
Advoot: wo astha aur ashish aj ring aur kapron ki shopping karne mall ja rahey hain toh mjhe aur kalindi ko
Inke sath nikalna hai
Shlok's blood boiled listening to her name with someone else
But now he knew what he had to do
He will win her back
He has faith in him and he has faith that astha still loves her
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Astha her parents and ashish and his parents were in the mall they were looking for sarees for astha for her engagment
Shlok reached the mall and saw astha in a saree shop
He watched her going to the try room with a saree and the rest going towards the men area
He took advantage of it and waited outside the try room
Just as the door clicked he entered the room and locked it
astha was looking beautiful and serene in the orange net saree with golden border
Astha was shocked to the core
Tu tu tum?
Oh toh ab ap sa tum?
Astha felt a gush of anger
Tumhari himmat kes-...
Shlok put his hand on her lip and one hand on her waist and pulled her close to him
Shlok moved his head near her ears and said in a low husky voice shhh agar tmhare hone waley pati na dekhliya toh kia soche ga?
Tears rolled
On asthas cheek
Shlok softened on seeing this and removed his hand from her lips and wiped her tears
His one hand was still on her waist and asthas hand were on his chest trying to move but his hold was firm
Astha stopped strugling and looked straight into his eyes and asked
What do you want now shlok?
He smiled listening his name from her mouth but her next sentence broke him
you want to destroy me further?but letme tell you there is nothing left for you to play with.
He left her waist but another thought came into his mind and he started walking toward her he cornered her to the mirror took her in his arms his both hands on her bare waist and said
You i want you Astha
In my house
In my room
In my Arms
Everyday Every night
Because you are in my heart now
He said pointing towards his heart
Astha was dumbfounded
She thought its a dream
Her heart was racing
Shlok: no its not a dream sweetheart he pinched her waist
Astha: ahh
Shlok angled his head smiled and kissed her cheeks and whispered in her ear
"I missed you alot sweetheart"
Saying this he left a statue astha and left the mall once he was in the car he smiled
Mission get astha back
Part 1-shock her with the change and relight the love in her heart TICK done
Part 2-Ask for forgiveness
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So this was part 2 the next part will be the last one have a great day :)
Edited by mycba - 11 years ago
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