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Astha what the hell was that you were about to say that you have feeling for him Ay Bappa yeh main kia karne wali thi yeh galat hai main unse door rahungi...Han yehi thek hai

Right at that moment manglesh sir entered the office and sighed

Manglesh:Astha

No response

Asthaaa

Astha: jee jee sir kia hua??

Manglesh: Kia jee jee jao yeh file Shlok sir ko da ao unho na subha ko mangi thi mere dimag sa nikal gaya tha

Astha:But sir yeh toh off time hai..main ja rahi hun bus.

Manglesh:han toh jate jatr deti jao tumhe kia masla hai.

...

Astha was outsidw his cabin and was about to knock when she saw some girl in his cabin from the glass in the door

That girl turned and it was no one other than the girl from the morning with whom she had a fight

She moved closer to the door and tried to listn there convo

Shlok: Nice acting Neha you got that astha to speak up now you can leave take this money you needed

Neha:Thank you soo much shlok but Astha is very innocent why are you doing this to her?

Shlok(his eyes closed and hands clenched)
:its none of your Damn business
No ONE gets away like that after insulting My Father i will break her heart into pieces

Neha: Dont do something that you will regret

Shlok : Just leavee now!!!

Neha opened the door and was shocked to see Astha there

Astha was standing at the door with tears in her eyes she wanted to run from there but she couldnt it was like she was fixed to that place

Neha left looking at both of them
Shlok felt a punch in his heart seeing her

Shlok saw her tear stricken face she was looking directly into his eyes
Her eyes were only asking one question why did he did that to her.

A small "Astha" escaped his mouth

He walked toward her and held her arms
Shlok Belive...
His touch brought Astha backed to her senses and she pushed shlok back with All her might
JUST SHUTT UP HOW DARE YOU?
She threw the file on his face
And ran from there

Shlok was still standing there shocked at what had happened
His heart was burning
I have lost her
I lost someone i love once again
This time only i am responsible for this
He wiped his tears

No she deserved it no one messes with My father Shlok Agnohotri was Back

...

Astha was lying on her bed crying

Why Bappa why me why did he did this to me was my mistake so big did i really deserves this
She started thinking about moments with him

Then her anger rose and she decided that she wont cry over him
Astha he was just a crush a jerk thats all

But somewhere deep inside she knew that she had loved him deeply.

...

1 month had passed since that incident.Astha had resigned the very next day.
Shlok got the news from M n M when he called astha's office
His guilt multiplied

This 1 month had changed Astha alot she has stopped talking useless and is alot more serious now.her mother and ajju had tried everything to know what happened but she somehow convinced them

Now there was a rishta for Astha

Advoot:Astha beta now we want you to get married..there is a rishta for you..

They were all on the dining table when her father asked her this question

Astha: i m ready that i will marry where ever you want

But beta you dont know his name and you didnt even asked his proffession

Astha: it doesnt matter

And she left

In her room

I know i cant be with him ever
But i miss him
Now it doesnt matter who i marry my soul will always be for you but i will never tell you that shlok never
I just hatee you for making my life hell

...

This month was hell for shlok he felt he had gone 2 yrs back when he had lost swati
24/7 there was only 1 pic in his mind Astha standing with tear stricken face outside his cabin

His mind heart night day all were spent in thinking about her
He tried to call her several times but could gather courage for that
Every night he goes to her house and sees her sitting in the balcony
Sometime reading a book sometime crying sometime talking to herself

But NEVER smiling

And it breaks his heart to see the damage he has done

He stays there till she goes into her room
This has become his routine
Astha never noticed him there but she always felt content sitting in that balcony

Shlok has no idea what he feels he only knows that he feels peace every night seeing astha
...,...
Shlok was coming down the stairs when he saw Asthas dad giving some card to his father he came there

NA: arrey shlok bhi agaya..shlok dekho kitni achi khabar laye hain yeh

Shlok: kia khabar

Asthas dad: ap bhi zaroor ayega kal

He gave the card to shlok and left with NA to talk something

Shlok opens the card and gets the shock of his life

Astha kirlosker engagement with Ashish singhania

He tore the card into pieces

Like hell i would let that happen
You are mine Astha only and only mine.no one can take you away i will make you mine i promise



Hey so how was it guys?
Do tell me your views as this is my first time should i continue it or not?

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Part 3 page 6
part 4 page 8
Edited by mycba - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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You cant stop it like that. Continue. Please. This was rocko! 👏
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Wow loved reading it, please continue I want to read what happens next
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ya do continue soon
lovely one ...wanna read hw Shlok ll re-gain Astha trust and love
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Please continue, I really like the storyline :)
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Thankyou for such a great response i will surely update soon
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wow just loved it dear...plz continue soon.. 😊
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please continue and update as fast as u can... please do PM me...
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Loved it! Would like to see a similar track in the show!
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