It has a little mature comment which made me blush... well mature stuff always does 😳
The story was fast but for an OS it was perfect 😃
The title was well justified 👏
and I totally loved it ❤️
my fav part was of course Asad and his superman boxers... I could imagine him in that totally
It was light enough to take my mind away from the show and you posted at a perfect time ⭐️
It was short... enough to change it from a drabble to an OS
but totally mesmerizing
I loved both the povs
Asad's was my fav though
The way his feelings are shown when he laid his eyes on Zoya are amazing
I wonder what happened to the omelette
I am vegetarian and so can't eat it... you can have it though
I loved the last line too
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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