Originally posted by: Chandu2000
Loved it a lot...please write a chapter or two abt arshi wedding !!
Originally posted by: IssPKaur
Wiwy the wicked!!! Khush kiya kudiye!!!!! Just finished reading last three updates so this is a combo comment for all three. Introducing Maa's dupatta, in fact that entire temple scene with her and Anjali in their Radha Krishna temple at Sheesh Mahal, was divine. A touch of gold. Original, and so perfectly used in the Diwali update!
Usske liye special 👏 👏.I'm so glad you extended the story. The latest update doesn't feel stretched in the least... like it was always meant to be like this! I've always really liked the urgency with which you explore their intimacy. Works wonderfully...cos it's so real!Bed ko kya fit kiya marble mansion mein tumney! 😆Absolutely adored the moment he drapes Maa's dupatta around her shoulders. Great touch. ⭐️And the most brill line: Angrejo ka rakhshak 😆 Hanuman ji ka chela 😆 😆...apt apt description for humara angrej raijada!!Don't end it yaar!!! Aur agar you just have to have to, then please write another one jaldi se!! This is way too much fun!!
chapter 25
awesomemindblowingi was loving every inch of itthanks a lot for wonderful update😃
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow seriously loved the update and this story so much! keep up the great work! thanks for pm!
Originally posted by: rockingsoni
good one...so, atlast arnav ready to accept...
Brilliant update..
Loved d update vry much..
This was absolutely fine, Wiwy. Read all of it. 😳 Anjali is sitting on the steps, dozing. 😆 Poor girl, for how long? And wow, she's absolutely cool about this whole thing. 😆 Of course she's overjoyed to see her Chotey so happy. What a sis to have. Btw, that was a nice practical excuse she gave to Khushi's parents.
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