*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
u didnt gave us morning romance,but nevermind u will write another chap..hisab barabar ho gaya..
oh anjali finally khush,did she cried at that tym also?
aasjhiq raizada wanted to bring khushi london😆,ruka nai ja raha th..
THEIR PH CONVO...why he was talking like hindi serial hero..kuch ho gya toh...
ooh..khushi changed into savitri mode..saved her satyavan from gear failure...
wah kya pyar hai...

khushi is happy now,arnav is her,she told her family abt him...as usual,..hai re nandkishore was the ans..

and my my...dilwale dulhaniya lene aagye..london...se...railway station nai tha toh kya hua..airport...toh tha..
arnav opened his arms like srk and khushi ran ,like kajol...seriusly i remembered DDLJ.
only sarso k kheth was minus...

so wat next..i want longgg last update...😛
and yeah my PS 2 in mind,if u can add..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thankyou for reading and enjoying😃

Originally posted by: nisso

awesome update!

loved it! 👏

I wait for the following updating

Thanks a tonne! 😃🤪


thankyou surlin😃



Originally posted by: AnjuRish

first thanx for continuing

awww even inm tension her brains worked and she saved her arnavji again



aww really God has meant them to be together

That is how it is! you are right! Pre ordained by DM! 😃Thanks for your comment and I am racking my brains as how to continue!😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
Super woman saved her super man
Nice update
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Originally posted by: premdewaani

Superb update dear!!!! Loved it:-))


Thankyou so much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandu2000

Loved it a lot...please write a chapter or two abt arshi wedding !!


Thankyou very much for liking the story!😃 i am writing one more chapter. please bear with me😃 like you have so long.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Wiwy the wicked!!! Khush kiya kudiye!!!!! Just finished reading last three updates so this is a combo comment for all three. Introducing Maa's dupatta, in fact that entire temple scene with her and Anjali in their Radha Krishna temple at Sheesh Mahal, was divine. A touch of gold. Original, and so perfectly used in the Diwali update!

Usske liye special 👏 👏.

I'm so glad you extended the story. The latest update doesn't feel stretched in the least... like it was always meant to be like this! I've always really liked the urgency with which you explore their intimacy. Works wonderfully...cos it's so real!
Bed ko kya fit kiya marble mansion mein tumney! 😆

Absolutely adored the moment he drapes Maa's dupatta around her shoulders. Great touch. ⭐️

And the most brill line: Angrejo ka rakhshak 😆 Hanuman ji ka chela 😆 😆...apt apt description for humara angrej raijada!!

Don't end it yaar!!! Aur agar you just have to have to, then please write another one jaldi se!! This is way too much fun!!





Issk kudiye⭐️ thanks yaar for your combo comment and your encouragement all through! It touches me that is why I hate you so!😃
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Originally posted by: salooni

chapter 25

awesome
mindblowing
i was loving every inch of it
thanks a lot for wonderful update😃


How sweet Soni!😃 Thankyou for reading inspite of exams and other work!😃
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Thankyou so much😃
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow seriously loved the update and this story so much! keep up the great work! thanks for pm!


Thanks for your encouragement and support😃


Originally posted by: rockingsoni

good one...so, atlast arnav ready to accept...


Yes Arnav is in love😉 Thanks for liking😃


Originally posted by: salooni

oh wow

thanks a lot
will miss this ff 😃


Thanks Soni! i will miss your comments too!😃


Originally posted by: -MKM-

Brilliant update..
Loved d update vry much..


Brilliant huh? Me so happy! Thanks a tonne!

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