My first OS- Sanchi Ka Bhanda Fod

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends,

I have written this OS after watching past few episodes and after reading this week spoilers. This is my first OS so please bear with me.

Sanchi Ka Bhanda Fod

In Udaipur, Sanchi's friends comes to know about SaJa breakup. They suggest her to fight for her love. After some talk they leaves.

In Jaitsar, Bhairon comes to meet Jagya. He says he understands that there is a reason why Jagya did this. He also says he agrees to JaGa2 relationship. Jagya informs Bhairon that Tomorrow, he is going to marry Ganga in Mandir. Bhairon assures him that he will come there to give his Ashirwad.

In KB, Anandi openly declares that she is in favor of JaGa2 relationship in front of Shiv. This makes him more angry 😡. He even refuses to look at Anandi.

Next Day

Sanchi comes to know that Jagya is going to marry Ganga in Mandir ( I don't know how she comes to know). She remembers what her friend told her yesterday.

Flash Back

Sanchi's friend: Sanchi, tu Jagdish ko itni aasani se nahi chod sakti. Jagdish ne sirf Ganga ki maang bhari hai. Shadi nahi hui hai unki. Tujhe apne pyar ke liye ladhana chahiye.

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She comes out of her room, she comes downstairs. Without informing anyone she runs out of KB. Ira watches her running so she shouts Sanchi. All Shekhars comes there, Ira informs them about Sanchi. All Shekhars follows Sanchi ( aur aata bhi kya hai inko, especially Ira ko ).

In Jaitsar, Bhairon convinced all family members for Mandir visit.

JaGa2 reaches Mandir. Panditji asks them to sit. Sanchi reaches there when Panditji about to start rituals. She shouts-

Sanchi: Ruk jaiye Jagdish.

JaGa2 shocked 😲

Shekhars n Singhs also reaches there.

Sanchi: Jagdish, agar aapne Ganga se shadi ki toh main ji nahi paungi. Main apni jaan de dungi.

Everyone shocked 😲

Ira: Sachi beta, yeh tu kya keh rahi hai, shant ho ja beta.

Shiv: Sanchi, hosh mein aa, yeh ghatiya insan tere layak nahi hai.

Sanchi: Nahi mom, agar Jagdish mere nahi huye toh main apne aap ko maar dalungi.

By saying this she takes out a knife ( yeh mat puchna ke knife kaha se layi ) n puts on her wrist.

Everyone tries to stop her but she refuses.

But Jagya ignores all antiques by Sanchi.

Shiv becomes more furious 😡.

Shiv: Look Sanchi, the person for whom you are going to kill yourself, not even looking at you.

After realizing that Jagya is not at all paying attention, Sanchi snatches Anandi by one hand and puts knife on her neck.

Everyone shocked 😲.

Sanchi: Jagdish agar aap ab bhi nahi mane toh main Anandi ko maar dalungi. Main janti hun aap ab bhi Aandi se pyar karte hai.

Shiv: Sanchi yeh tu kya keh rahi hai?? Chod de Anandi ko. Who teri bhabhi hai.

Sanchi: No bhaiya, aaj main isse nahi chodungi. Aaj main isse badla lekar rahungi.

Shiv: Kaisa badla?? Kya keh rahi hai tu??

Sanchi: Bhaiya, yeh Anandi aapko dhoka de rahi hai. Aapki achchai ka fayda utha rahi hai. Sach toh yeh hai bhaiya. Sach toh yeh hai bhaiya ke yeh aaj bhi Jagdish se pyar karti hai.

Shiv shocked 😲 and angry 😡.

Sanchi: ( shouting ) Han bhaiya Jagdish aur Anandi ab bhi ek dusre se pyar karte hai.

Everyone shocked to hear this ( tana dhim tana, tana dhim tana music at BG )

Shiv loses his control. He snatches knife from Sanchi, takes Anandi to his side, and gives a tight slap to Sanchi .

Everyone shocked (Baki sabko shocked hone ke alava kuch nahi aata)

Sanchi: Bhaiya, maine aapko iss aurat ke chagul se chudane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya?? Kitna bada drama kiya maine, Anandi ko aapke life se dur karne ke liye, Jagdish jaise ( 3rd timer) insane se pyar karne ka natak kiya, apne gharwalon ke khilaf gayi. Gharwalon ko, especially mom aur apko Anandi ke khilaf bhadkane ki koshish ki. Jab mujhe ehsas hua ke Ganga Jagdish se pyar karne lagi hai, tab Jagdish ki mom ko uske khilaf bhadkaya. Mujhe laga tha bahut mushkil hoga, lekin who toh itni bewkuf nikli k eek hi baar mein mere jaal mein fas gayi.

Uske baad maine restaurant mein Anandi aur Jagdish ko dekha. Mine jaan bujhkar Jagdish ki family ke bare mein bhala-bura kaha. Main janti thi key eh suane ke baad Jagdish rishta tod denga aur Anandi uska saath degi. Aur yeh sab hone ke baad aap sab lok Anandi ko ghar se nikal doge, lekin aisa nahi hua.

Par main haar nahi manungi. Main Anandi ko humare ghar se aue bhaiya ki zindagi se bahar nikal kar hi rahungi.

Shiv: (fuming in anger) 😡 Bas Sanchi, ek au shabd meri patni ke khilaf aur main bhul jaunga ke tum meri behen ho.

Anani: 😭 Sachi, tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho, mere dil mein Jagya ke liye koi bhavnaye nahi hai. Main manti hhun ke mujhe shiv ko apnane mein waqt laga. Lekin mera yakin karo main sirf Shiv se pyar kati hun. Mere dil mein unke alava koi nahi hai.

Ira: Nahi, meri Sanchi aisa nahi kar sakti. Meri bacchi aisa nahi kar sakti.

Ira comes to Sanchi, holds her face in her hand-

Ira: Bolo beta ke yeh jhooth hai. Tum kisi ke dabav mein yeh bol rahi ho. Bolo ke yeh jhooth hai beta.

Sanchi aggressively removes Ira's hands.

Sanchi: No mom, yahi sach hai. I hate Anandi mom, I hate her.

Sumi: 😭 Itna bada dhoka. Sanchi maine tumhe apni beti mana. Tumhe itna pyar diya. Tumhare liye apne hi pati se jhagda kiya, apne bete ko galat theheraya, uss phool jaisi bachchi (pointing at Ganga) ke saath kitna galat kiya. Aur tumne, mere ussi pyar ka fayda uthaya, mujhe itna bada dhoka diya. Kyun Sanchi??

Gehna: Shant ho jaiye jiji, sambhaliye apne aap ko.

DS: Sumitra, sambhal apne aap ko. Bhul toh mhare se bhi hui hai jo meri anubhavi aankhen iss chori ke chal ko pehchan na paai.

Bhairon: 😊 Main janta tha iss bar mera beta galat nahi hai.

After all this drama Daddu and Alok apologizes to Singhs. After some mel-milap JaGa2 marriage takes place. Then Singhs ( including JaGa2 ) leaves for BH and Shekhars for Udaipur.

In BH, Sumitra welcomes JaGa2. Sumi apologizes all family members.

In KB,

Shiv: Mujhe toh yakin nahi ho raha ke meri Sanchi aisa kar sakti hai.

Ira: Yakin toh mujhe bhi nahi ho raha. Dukh sirf iss baat ka hai ke maine apni beti jaisi bahu ko itna galat samjha.

Anandi beta maaf karde apni iss maa ko.

Anandi: Nahi maa, aap maafi mat mangiye. Aap mujhse badi ahi. Aur waise bhi jo hua usme aapki koi galti nahi hai ( typical serial bahu dialogue )

After few minutes, Shekhars retires for their respective rooms.

In Ansh room,

Shiv apologizes from Anandi, they share some emotional lovey- dovy moments 😳 ( you can imagine cute, emotional Ansh scene ).

Aur iss tarah Sanchi ka sach sabke samne aaya aur dono pariwaro ki khushiya bhi laut aayi 😃

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Likhte likhte kuch jyada hi bada ho gaya naa??

First I thought Sanchi cant reveal anything, then I realised she is Psycho, she can do anything.

Sorry if its too weak and illogical.

Feel free to give likes and reply 😆.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Pari😆
Great job👏 I'll forget logics and stuff

Coz this was a dhamakedarr treat for me,
Loved the comic dialogues and phrases in the brackets😆
Thoroughly enjoyed it, keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pari hope this happens in serial

but I now Bv Cvs want to run there show for another 1000 epis so they will not bring Sa ka sach so soon in front of everybody 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice

So Sa was not only doing drama for caring for family but also to love Jagya

Ek kami reh gayi

Sa ko bas thappad

Uske ilaaj ke liye mental asylum mein bhej dena tha

Anandi ke attemped murder mein andar karwa dena chahiye tha

U know BV wale will never get rid of Sa But we have the power to do that

For a first timer it was very nice

AnSh ko KB se move out karwa dete because Sa is still in KB n a threat to Anandi's life

😃for the bandha fod

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudhaiyer86

Wow Pari😆

Great job👏 I'll forget logics and stuff

Coz this was a dhamakedarr treat for me,
Loved the comic dialogues and phrases in the brackets😆
Thoroughly enjoyed it, keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks Sudha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet005

Pari hope this happens in serial

but I now Bv Cvs want to run there show for another 1000 epis so they will not bring Sa ka sach so soon in front of everybody 😡

Me too hope so, but I know its not going to happen 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Very nice

So Sa was not only doing drama for caring for family but also to love Jagya

Ek kami reh gayi

Sa ko bas thappad

Uske ilaaj ke liye mental asylum mein bhej dena tha

Anandi ke attemped murder mein andar karwa dena chahiye tha

U know BV wale will never get rid of Sa But we have the power to do that

For a first timer it was very nice

AnSh ko KB se move out karwa dete because Sa is still in KB n a threat to Anandi's life

😃for the bandha fod

Thanks,
Inn sab par ek FF / SS ban sakta hai 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...awesome pari...
everything solved..and everyone convinced and that stupid put knife on anandis neck...she can very well do so...

very nice attempt pari...

do write more...

the one thing i liked the most is sachi came to know about their shaaadi and ur comment for that...i dont know...haha..hilarious...

superb work dear...

and logic..leave it behind...

nowadays its not seen anywhere...lol...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HemaG

hey...awesome pari...

everything solved..and everyone convinced and that stupid put knife on anandis neck...she can very well do so...

very nice attempt pari...

do write more...

the one thing i liked the most is sachi came to know about their shaaadi and ur comment for that...i dont know...haha..hilarious...

superb work dear...

and logic..leave it behind...

nowadays its not seen anywhere...lol...

Thanks Hema 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg this is too good and i really want this to happen in bv too.

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