Originally posted by: RizArshi
Part 8
I am extremely sorry for the delay. Chapter 8 was very nice. It was very thoughtful of the family to leave them alone so that they can open up to each other. Arnav thinking he was the one to make Khushi agree to accompany him to Andaman while it was Khushi playing her tricks on Arnav was very interesting.
Part 9
It was a beautiful update. Each and every emotion came out beautifully. Arnav is right in his place. Khushi was asking for his life. He couldn't risk Khushi for anything. But again its her happiness that matters the most to him. I felt very bad for him. Khushi was not wrong either. I loved how she realized that her wish to have a child was taking a toll on Arnav and she would never want to put him in such a situation where he has to sacrifice his peace of mind for her happiness. These are the lines that I liked the most:
"Be practical Khushi. You are asking me to risk every happiness in my life, my very life because I will cease to exist if anything happens to you. Tum mujse meri zindagi maang rahi ho. Jaanti ho?"
Finally Arnav gave in. He can never deny Khushi. He drew his much needed strength from Khushi's faith in him. You have described their intimacy aesthetically. Loved it.
Part 10
And they are back. It was great to see both Arnav and Khushi back in their element. Their moments were lovely. We got to learn about the South Indian culture too. It was a nice touch. The ending was very sweet.
Part 11
It was a sweet update. Khushi's wish has become her obsession and it doesn't seem healthy. It was very sweet of Arnav to follow her instructions without objecting even once. I liked the way he tried to make her understand without upsetting her. It was a nice chapter.
Part 12
LOL trust Arnav to say what the in such a situation. It was cute. Their moments with the rest of the family were lovely. They reminded me of the movie Hum saath saath hai. Nice update. Thanks for all the five PMs :)
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