DILWALE DEVIL DHULANIYA LE JAYENGE...!! ~ KR FF.. *Hold On*

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rhu90
update soon...

yup..will update soon..😊

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

i luv in it

update soon..😊

plzzz😃

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ronikaseth
i luv in it

update soon..😊

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nyc intro
Looking interesting
And do pm me

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: love_arsha
Nyc intro
Looking interesting
And do pm me

thnk u..😊

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

CHAPTER 1

In the palace of Udiapur there was a girl sitting in the most beautiful room of entire palace and writing down something in her personal diary...

Girls POV

Meri choti behen, uss jaisa iss duniya me koi nhi hai... aur ho bhi nhi sakta kyu ki wo KRIYA GHAI' jo hai...bohot badi jhali hai par dil ki saaf bhi hai..massoom hai aur sabki madat karne waali..

Kabhi choti bachi ki tarah harkatein kart hai..toh kbhi badi hogyi ho ese baat karti hai..maa papa ki laddli aur humare rajya ka aakhoka taara..aur humare rajya ki praja ki sabse laadli aur pyaari rajkumari...

Uski haasi se pura rajh mahel roshan ho uthta hai...aur agar udaas hojaye to chand bhi rooth jata hai humse..aur agar gussa ho jaye to samjho sabki shamat aagyi..aur jab shararate karti hai tab use bachna mushkil hi nhi na mumkin hai..

Magar sabki bohot fikar rehti hai usse...maa papa aur mujhe bohot maan deti hai..humare praja aur nokron ka bohot khayal rakhti hai..sabka khayal rahta hai usse..kisko kya chaiye ye sab dekh thi hai...kisko bhi dukhi nhi dekh sakti hai...sabko apne masoomiyat se khush karti deti hai...

Magar kbhi kbhi dar lagta hai ki koi uski iss masomiyat ka fayada na uthale...koi bhi mushkil me ho ye janke unki madat mai lag jati hai fir dekhti bhi nhi ki wo insaan aacha hai ya bura...

Kbhi kbhi bohot galtiya karti hai..magar uspe chilane ka maan nhi karta hai...kya kare itni pyaari jo hai..eysi hai meri jhali si magar pyaari si kriya meri choti behen jise me apne aapse bhi zada pyaar karti ho...jise me kbhi bhi udaas nhi dekh sakti hoo..i love u kriya..!!

POV End

Girl closed her dairy and went to kriya's room and looked at her..kriya was sleeping very cutely...the girl went near kriya and crased her hair...nd kissed her forehead...and went back to her own room closing the door without making any noise...nd slept..

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Heya guyzz so this was 1^st chappy

Hope u all like it

Plzzz do hit like tab nd leave ur review..

Sorry I knw chota update hai

Bt m not felling well so plzz do understand

Promise next update will be bada wala

Have great day..!!

Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

first we wanna thank each n everyone who liked n commented, thanqq guys...

above is d first chappy of this FF

do hit the like tab also comment

new readers send the BUDDY REQUEST to Abhilasharsha or Princess_Devil or Neha_KR for PM's

Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

1st. . . . .
1st. . . . . . .
1st. . . . . . . . .
Me 1st. . . . . . . .
Uhhuuu. . . . . . . . . .
Awsome 1st chappy guys :-D
Kriya ki behna = ofcouse sharon. .
Haiyee. .shar realy loves kriyaa. .
Wow. .ek taraf se yeh kriya ka intro tha whch was realy nice. .
Nice update guys :-D. .

waise maine aur bi bahut kuch notice kiya.
4 eg :
as we all knw its a historic story. .toh tell me ,
uss time pe,
1. Log dairy likhte the?? I guess uss time pe papar bi invent nai hua tha.🤣
2. Jhalli. . .seriously 🤣
3. Papa. . .🤣 i thought pitashri ya sumthng like dat bolte hai. .🤣🤣
4th and the best wala observation. . .

"I LOVE UUU"🤣🤣

Seriously. . .yeh kab invent hua tha? Isnt she shud say, "mai apni behan se bahut prem kerti hu" aur sumthng like dat. .
Typical n shuddh hindi bolte hai naa?? 🤣🤣

toh kaise lagge mere observations?
Zarur batana. . .
N nxt part jaldi update krna. .
Egarly waiting 4 it. .:-D

Edited by Madhukumari - 11 years ago