RaYa - OS - raastein phir mil gaye, updated on pg 16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

good concept 

continue soon😊

thanks for commenting😊

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

 interesting story ..only I can say ..plz continue soon..cant wait for long

 

thank you, will definitely continue

Originally posted by: sampa123

ofcourse cntinue karo..vry good cncept..mujhe donoka loneliness boht accha laga...jb dono milenge ak dusre ki khalipan ko fllup karenge to kitna accha hoga..bs do jaan jee uthenge

thanks for liking😊, dekhte hain kya hota hain inn dono ke zindagi me, kya wakei yeh dono ek dusre ke ho payenge?, continue reading to know next

Originally posted by: peeyara

nice concept 👏

it was very good, Ram n Priya hv become friends 😛

continue soon 😊 thanks for pm

thanks for commenting😊, will continue, my pleasure

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

good one😆, but seriously am not afraid of you particularly, am afraid of myself actually every time I write something am apprehensive of that, may be I always feel that my readers want best from me that's why I get little shaky but after getting such good responses from them am at ease now

i agree being an writer i to feel very afraid😕😕😕 abhi bhi hota hain

that good u r ease now

Originally posted by: Birdy91

hey Jinee hyiiiee.. birdy here :-) awww wht a butiful Os... Loved it yaar.. butifully written... Raya's character u defined very well.. waiting for d nxt part.. update soon.. n mjhe bhi PM kr dena :-P

hey Birdy91, good to see u here in this OS, welcome, thanks for liking it, will definitely continue, well u can add me in ur buddy list and I will sent u the PM of all my ongoing FF and SS too with this one😊 

Originally posted by: shavii

i agree being an writer i to feel very afraid😕😕😕 abhi bhi hota hain

that good u r ease now

yes, ab thoda bohot ease hoon after reading such good comments, thanks for loving this OS of mine😊

the next part of this OS will be updated tomorrow, till then keep reading and commenting

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for liking, yes loveguru ki entry toh ho gayi hain, ab dekhte hain kya hota hain, tumhe thanks kehene ki zaroorat nahi hain, its my pleasure, mood toh puri tarah se theek nahi hua hain but yes am OK, am trying to live with that😊

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

the next part of this OS will be updated tomorrow, till then keep reading and commenting

have to wait so long