RaYa - OS - raastein phir mil gaye, updated on pg 16 - Page 2

Nice beginning. Interesting..
Ab toh ram aur priya ke loveguru couple ki entry hui hai toh baazi palatnewali hai.
Beautiful beginning. Looking forward.
So finally ujjaini thx for the one third treat for the week. Ab yakeen ho gaya ur mood is alright.
Ok COOl.

good concept 

 interesting story ..only I can say ..plz continue soon..cant wait for long

 

ofcourse cntinue karo..vry good cncept..mujhe donoka loneliness boht accha laga...jb dono milenge ak dusre ki khalipan ko fllup karenge to kitna accha hoga..bs do jaan jee uthenge

nice concept 👏

hey Jinee hyiiiee.. birdy here :-) awww wht a butiful Os... Loved it yaar.. butifully written... Raya's character u defined very well.. waiting for d nxt part.. update soon.. n mjhe bhi PM kr dena :-P

Originally posted by: shavii

good concept continue soon like the way u started.
so raya are lonely souls jab saat ayenge too aur achha lagega😳😳😳
why do i feel the persons ram talking will be the person dealing in drugs😕 or it may also bhi nevik but no guaranty
continue soon want to read this os😳

thanks for liking it, I was having some doubt whether u will like it or not, btw Ram is talking with Vikram ans Neha, will continue definitely
Edited by jineejiggs - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshiram

Hi di...really a nice concept read it in one go...loved the priya's innocence and her perseverence and ram is a gentleman superb...want to read more di continue soon...thnks for pm

hello dear...thank you for liking the story, will definitely continue, pleasure is all mine

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

hey it is a good story with different concept

liked it very much u should continue

thanx for the pm waiting for he next part

thanks for commenting, will continue definitely, pleasure is all mine

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

Its a diff concept..loving it...
Priya as a strong character n ram is so humble...
Looking forward to d next update

I tried to show a different RaYa and I hope you all like them😊