SwaRon OS : The best Assistant Ever! - Page 5

austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

very nice. liked the portrayal of emotions n d calm sharon.

waiting to read the next part n for their friendship to grow into something deeper. shouldn't take long considering that the butterflies have already taken up residence inside swayam's tummy!

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice start

the dadi thingie was entertaining

it was good

kitchen in the cupboard

thanks for the pm

waiting for the next part

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for being late, but was not in a mood to read to the past 2 days 😆

I loved this part of the OS!!! It was very well written!! how Swayam-Sharon turn into good friends.. Even i have the same doubt as Sharon, if she uses cupboard as kitchen, then where does she keep her wardrobes 😲

Update the next part asap

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

One of the most awesomest n classy piece of work i ve ever read...

Aisha dis was fab fab fab..

From d concept to its execution it wa brillaint..

I loved it to d core..

Loved how u started off n den continued n den sharons past story all was perfectly penned down..

Brilliant os dear..

Pls updat next part soon..

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing start 😊

continue soon

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swapna

@shan16

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

awsome OS...

u pick up good idea ...Its suberb OS based on our lover boys dialogue ..THE BEST ASSISANT EVER ..well suited title ...

Plz pm me nexxttt...

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for the late reply!!

it was a great OS!!

loved the story!!

and i loved the songs too!!

they are some of my favorites!!

Awesome Job!!

update the 2nd part soon!!!

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

hey Aiisha

fantastic; mind blowing OS 😊

really loved it ❤️

amazingly written 👏

Its is simply great

keep up the great work 👍🏼

do continue and update the next part soon

want to read further...

do PM me and thanks for the PM

And sorry for the late reply

love

Mehvash

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

arre aishaa wat to say abt u

teri tarif karte karte thak gayi but u dont get tired writing so awesome os rather coming up wid awesome ideas

u r a factory of ideas

loved this os a lot

actually the best assistence ever !!!!

n yeppi u r going to continue it

plz update soon

waiting eagerly for ur update

sorry for late comment

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was amazing

Aaawww Sharon's Daadi was so cute when she was questioning Sharon and Sharon was when she got embarrassed

I love how they are opening up to each other

Please update soon

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