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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

nice start

pm me😃

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

it was a nice OS

loved it

thanks for the pm

do update soon

and do pm me

u send me pm's 3 times Why???

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome..
its quite different n i loved it alot..
really well written👏
love to read further..
plz update soon..
n thanks for the pm:

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome! I just loved the concept. I am glad sharon opened up to swayam...i cant wait till she realizes that she has already fallen for swayam! Please update soon.

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

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It was a very beautifully written OS. The story was great, the emotions were amazing. Sharon was portrayed as a heartbroken girl who found someone that could possibly be the right guy. I loved it.

Can't wait for the next part. Thanks for the PM. Keep writing! :)

Edited by shivheena123 - 10 years ago

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushaan
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it ws one of the ossam piece i ever read...aisha u hav a charm in ur writing by which u can earn many readers..
this sentence itself means alot to me. thanks :)
so always keep tht charm in ur writing ...
n i must say u r 1 of the best writer in this forum...
umm well, a definite no. i surely dont deserve to be called.
keep up the good work dear...
n yaa update soon n do pm me.. this work ws brilliantly written...hoping nxt part would be more ossam...
will definitely try to make it as good as possible :)
bhavika...

thanks for the comment. seems like ure reading my work for the 1st time

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

i just finish read in one go... bthe chapter was just superb and wonderful...
it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me

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medha

@ToujoursPur

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome way of writing aisha----

i love your style and ur idea.

keep it up girl.

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SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

And you know I'm reading something and rather commenting after I guess 1 year! I was soo inactive here, aisha tujhe me yaad bhi nahi hongi I'm so sure :p anyways I'm isha, if you remember :p btw, awesomeee wala update tha, loved it :D

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zk456789

@zk456789

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice work waiting for the next part
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

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