RaYa OS - phir le aaya hoon.........updt last part pg 5 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb Superb Superb Superb Superb dear loved it ...pls do such os often it really feels good to read such os..justified your story a lot..love,disappointment,romance,emotional...loved it loved it loved itEdited by sakshirambalh - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Finaly they got married...
Aftr 7yrs raya confessed their love...
Nice description...
U should cont it...
Love it...
Awesome osEdited by 123fiza1 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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There is an innovation of not having a compromise marriage.

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love4raya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey Jinny lovely..Loved it as usual...I was so engrossed in reading it..I forgot its an OS.. Would love to read more of ur ffs and os..keep writing.. :)

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awsome yaar! Everything jst perfect in thier place...must say different story love bhi nehi arrange bhi nehi..a mixing story of love nd arrange...beautifully written...lovely...waiting 4 another os...

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Sanjukta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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superb os yaar ..i love all ur writing but this os touch my heart ..every part ..from the starting to the end ..superb imagination..thank u for ur pm..and plz write more yaar ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

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beautiful end 👏

finally they got married after 7 yrs 😊

it was arranged + love marriage😛

pls do often write such os😛

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thank you all for loving this OS of mine, am really touched with the responses I got from all of my readers. My heartfelt thanks to u all, this wouldn't have been possible without all of your love and support.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bpatil3
hey Ujjaini.
The story was end on happy note. its good. The way it progressed n the way u characterized each Superb.
Only thing what i felt dramatic was 7yrs wait without knowing each others feelings. Priya hide her feeling unto her and when ram tried to explain she escaped.Ram was left perplexed when priya didn't allow him to express or she shared her feelings. Was he not confused of her behavior? If it is the blind trust he waited for 7long yrs, then yes rite.

Apart from that everything else was narrated superbly.You are a good story teller and u describe things so well. Like ur writing.
Good job.

Thanx for the PM.

firstly thanks for liking the OS...yes both RaYa couldn't confess their emotion to one another, Priya didn't say because she didn't want to complicate the thing, moreover she was shattered to hear Ram has his fiancee as Meesha, on the other hand when ram wanted to confess his emotion Priya outrightly told him that she consider that night to be her worst dream, hearing this Ram was left dumbfounded though he can see her love in her eyes but he wanted some time to sort out things but Priya's drastic decision left him speechless, he wanted to give time to their relation but he couldn't do that...I hope I have able to answer your doubt...once again thank you for the comment

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sinalbest

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Superb end.. 👏 ⭐️
finally love fibd its way for Raya.. 😉 nicely shown 👏 ⭐️
Thanks for pm

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