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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hamlet
wonderful UD😊
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hi hammiee
so how was the holiday? regular ud on this thread ...enjoyed reading it😊
...dutta was deceived by many...but seema was the core & changed the innocent boy into dutta bahu
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dutta to dutta bhau journey girlfriend betralel dutta becaoming don
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Hi HammieπŸ€—
Episode-50
Wow...50 wonderful episodes & updates.....Congratulations dear..πŸ€—
Awe...wonderful update dear..Enjoyed it sooo much....Yeah you back with a big bang....Fabulous work Hammie....Enjoyed reading a lot...Yup Dutta has offloaded his painful past before Naku...Loved your writing so much...Such a detailed update dear.....Loved your side comments too.❀️..Its really a treat to read your awesome updates with your own thoughts....Hammiee Totally drooling over Dutta's hand...Naughty Hammieee...Yeah Dutta's body language is totally different from Dutta bhau's body language.❀️..Brilliant acting by Mishal.πŸ‘...Twinky baby hates this seema to the core.😑...I wonder what did happen if Dutta met Naku instead of Seema??....Then there is no need for Dutta bhau...Dutta worked hard for this Seema...OMG He wanted a football team with Seema.😲..Twinky *Faints*...Can't believe this...Loved your foot note hammie...He needed a best partner...But What a wrong selection...Poor Dutta...His dream world is going to collapse before his eyes..😭.Loved the update so much Hammie..We all are really lucky to have you writer ji...Thank you so much dear.πŸ€—..take care..Twinky will back soon with her next  comment..😳

          

PS:- You didn't give any toys or sweets to Twinky baby...No Teddy bear hug for you πŸ˜›..Twinky baby turns her face away...πŸ₯Ί.

                   
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi Hammie πŸ˜Š

                        Welcome Back Greetings  
Back with a bang really,  what a fantastic episode n your writing makes it even more beautiful.  Its like reading a novel written by hamlet53.  It has your touch, your narrative, thoughts, etc.. gives it a fresh touch πŸ‘

Dutta was head over heels in luv with seema with all the innocence.  N Yeah mishal,s body language is so different, a boyish style n charm, his ear to ear grin,  aww such a rare sight, the voice modulation humble quiet shy, everything a clear distinction between two duttas.. Brilliant!  πŸ‘    hmm hammie stop lusting over his hands, nazar lagjayega lol... But have to admit his hands are lustworthy πŸ˜†
Hohohoo i dont believe he actually speaks about a football team with seema, too good.  As ever an introvert when it comes to physical proximity with the opposite sex, ladki se bhi zyada sharmata hai lol.. 
But poor fella his dreamgirl stabs him in the worst possible way.  It was not as if seema was under some duress, she did it deliberately n her love for dutta was nothing but a farce which hurt him the most.  He was taken for a ride., made to look like a fool, insulted, belittled   There are instances when extremely emotional people tend to react in an extreme way.
I think dutta couldnt or didnt open upto to anyone earlier as everyone in his family was in the knowhow of his failed liasion with seema n made little or no attempt to alleviate his pain.  Naku tried n he found someone he could offload without bein judged.  Naku was along with giving bhashans was a good listener which helped πŸ˜‰ 
The next episode im sure is even more gripping,  Thank you hammie.  


Hi BhartiπŸ€—
Awesome comment dearπŸ€—..Enjoyed it so much..
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100 % agree with you dear.πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ.Its really like reading a novel ...Wonderful work by Hammie...Such a great writer.....So sweet of you dear..πŸ€—..Teddy bear hug for you πŸ€—not for Hammie
πŸ˜›...She didn't give toys for Twinky baby..πŸ₯Ί
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi HammieπŸ€—

Awe...Such a heart wrenching update dear...OMG...Poor Dutta...He badly get insulted by that evil Seema...What a cruel witch.😑...Twinky baby wants to kill that Seema right now..😑..She made mockery out of Dutta.😑...Err...How can she insult  my Amul baby Dutta???.😑...I wonder How can she pokes fun at Dutta's appearance??.😲😲..He is the  most Handsome man in the world.. ...Twinky gives hot punches for  that evil Seema.😑...She lost the precious man called Dutta..Oh Dutta...Seema's words killed our innocent Dutta...The journey of Dutta to Dutta bhau starts from here...baji did a big role..He is the one who gave this underworld path..😲...Loved your foot note Hammie.❀️..Dutta finished that Govind Seth's story..Seema deserved this.😑...Loved the update so much dear..Enjoyed reading a lot..Specially your side comments are awesome Hammie..Such a great work dear..⭐️⭐️.Waiting for the next update ..Take care...tra' Twinky babyπŸ€— ( Angry Baby Bird)


           

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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcome Back HammieπŸ€—

This is a turning point episode in Dutta's life where his past blows up in flames and he enters the new dark dangerous world of crime.
 
Sometimes I wonder what made Dutta kill Govind? Was it his love for Seema or the betrayal of his love (DHOKHA) and the anger at his poverty and helplessness?

Great WUπŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hammie hi

Seema hits dutta where it hurts the most... It was like thousand daggers.  She  not only ditches him but mocks at his status, his masculanity, his audacity to even dream of luvg her.    This one act of treachery changed him from an innocent simple hardworking luvable guy to the fearful dreaded elusive don.  
What follows is worse...  Baji even though was miserable watching his friend in such pitiable state nothing warrants his actions next.  Instead of alleviating his friend,s pain, he guides him to take the forbidden path.  Thats totally unacceptable as a friend.  Its not as if dutta,s life depended on the quick money..  πŸ˜²
Dutta was not in his right mind n was only looking for ways to avenge, to soothe the anger, the pain of dejection.  Baji to me failed as a friend πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ   except for his two wise miserly words of warning there is clear evidence of him goading him to pick up the weapon.,   Being a willing accomplice in itself encourages the criminality.   He clearly has fallen from grace for me with this one act n then much later when he hides naku,s secret.  
The killing of govind was gruesome, along with govind it was the death of an innocent dutta n the birth of dutta bhao who now had blood in his hands πŸ˜’
Its interesting how dutta,s anger is primarily aimed at govind first n not seema. It was seema who willingly went to govind n it was seema who ditched him n it was seema who belittles him yet dutta prefers to take govind,s life.  

Brilliant writing hammie,  didnt miss the visuals not even for a moment, not even with the intense scenes.  Perfecto !!  πŸ‘
Hope your server issue is sorted soon, waitin for the next,  Thank you πŸ˜Š


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Posted: 10 years ago
 Excellent observations Bharti.

Baji failed as a friend to Dutta when he introduced him to the underworld. Agree. But if we look through the eyes of an uneducated youth who is already into crime it was the only way he thought he could save his friend from the misery(temporary). Baji's doesn't realize the degree of his mistake nor does he have the ability to foresee what he is letting Dutta into.

It is not that I am supporting Baji's action..but I am trying to understand why Baji did it when he was aware of the world of crime.

its interesting how Dutta vents his anger and kills Govind but let Seema off so easily.
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Wot???.😲😲..Hammie too have server issues???.πŸ˜²πŸ˜•..OMG...Twinky *sad*.😭..Yeah I didn't hear any roars today.😭😭..Hope Hammie's server issue is sorted soon.πŸ€—..Eagerly waiting for the next update Hammie....OH No!!!....How can Twinky baby stay without fighting with Hammieee??...Bharti!!...Luved you comment so much dear...Hammieee Come back sooon...πŸ€—πŸ€—...Baby is waiting for youπŸ€—

           
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