Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake #3 ~ Chapter 7 (Last)

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Read 6,7 chapters

loved them

a nice & decent ending

loved the SS

thanks for the email

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Hush finally... and i seriously don't know to feel happy for couple or sad FYS ended : (
But it was brilliant anon as expected from you nothing less : )
yeah... he finally got her nerve to give her the right medicine if only he had thought it before well lets blame celibacy... a satisfied Arnav is brilliant and a happy Arnav well we all saw the result.
Khushi... she was giving me fright throughout the chapter, arre he explained her so nicely... okay i know nicely is not the right word... but he tried nicely to explain her how he thinks about all this what she is trying to do but still no there she was again with "GOING".
Loved their convo at breakfast about keshav's return and there he played his cards again and got himself Proposed..!! brilliant Arnav brilliant.
and that was the best end this SS could get it was really touchy at the end, they adopted rape victims child and named her Aarti Singh Raizada perfect.
You are just awesome anon!!!
love you and thanks for writing.

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deepika45

@deepika45

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

loved it. they adopted and named after his mom. finally they are happy

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Loved it ...loves it... ESP the ending...the adoption is the best thing happened to ARSHI n the baby's life...

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sachdevaridhima

@sachdevaridhima

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

A lovely story ...u did justice bt I wanted more of this story ...that u merged in last update. ...bt overall u ended it up with giving the story the part which it needed. ...good work 😊 😊

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

What a beautiful tale of love, sacrifice and despair - you ended it by igniting love, passion and hope!!

I wish it hadn't ended but look forward to your next and mkm2.

All the best and thank you so much for penning 'For Your Sake' for our sake!!😊

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Loved it loved it just lived the way you ended this SS not too much dream or too less just perfect everything was on point

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

It was a well written take on real life. I appreciate your characterization of Khushi that remained consistent through out.

But to be honest I wished it was a bit more dramatic as the rest of the story afterall it is fiction and even the most realistic fiction is dramatised.

As a reader one is left to wonder if Khushi thinks she knows it all because she doesn't seem to want to listen, comprehend and weigh the pros and cons of anything expressed by Arnav unless she experiences it. In life that can be very hard on your partner thus making her a very hard wife to deal with.

Because there is a fineline between stubbornness and being opinionated. Khushi towards the end to me seemed more opinonated. She had an opinion about something and she refused to accept Arnav's point of view. Somehow, this shows a lack of balance in the opinion.

However, this is strictly my take and I hope you understand that your story had me hooked so much to feel all this.

I'm really glad to have read this story. I enjoyed this ride thoroughly all the way.

Thank you😊

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

So rushed! It all happened in one chapter. But a beautiful end to a beautiful story. The adoption was the icing on the cake. Looking forward to your other stories now.

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PixieFairy

@PixieFairy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

This is Second ArHi FF where i have read Arnav as lawyer & int i used to think i wont like it but to be honest i loved them more then words would do justice ..! Speaking about the FF The Role Reversal here Keshav instead of Anjali! And How This FF Is potrayed on ArHi keeping it on Real life lines was other thing that made me love it!!!!! Arnavs mom's past was nothing less then haunting but it does outcasts some cruel realities of a victim womens life ... Rape an extremly sensitive issue even dw for a part is just very well handled ... Arnav helping Khushi overcome her insecuties <3 Awsomely potrayed !! ... Khushi being a sacrifical goat but destiny is superior "Love did find its way"😳, ArHi's baby well as they say some "Relations are more then blood relations" goes well here!😃 & my fav quote from FF "What goes around , comes around" I was at loss of sleep last night after reading 4 chpts of this update the harsh realities of real life & putting them up so gracefully in your writing is not an easy job now! Great Job Dear Loved it! 👏👏

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